Otaku-sama Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 [align=center]I haven't made cards for a year or so. I was a devout RPer, but now I want to see if I'm still up to date with YGO. When you review, I'd really appreciate it if you show me the correct OCG when pointing out OCG mistakes. [spoiler=Effect]This card may not attack on the turn it is Summoned. Any Battle Damage inflicted by this card is doubled. When this card destroys a Monster Card as a result of battle, decrease the ATK and DEF of all face-up cards on your opponent's side of the Field by 300 until the End Phase of your turn. [spoiler=Effect]This card may not attack on the turn it is Summoned. This card cannot select a Monster Card in face-up Defense Position as an attack target. When this card destroys another Monster as a result of battle, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of face-up monsters on the Field with more than 5 stars x 200. Once per turn, you may choose to Tribute this face up card to destroy one Monster on the Field. [spoiler=Effect]This face-up card is also treated as a Warrior-type monster. When this card is Normal Summoned, place three 'Production' counters on this card. When this card would have been destroyed as a result of battle or by a card effect, remove one 'Production' counter from this card. When there are no more counters on this card, this card is treated as a Normal Monster. [spoiler=Effect]This face-up card is also treated as a Machine-type monster. This card is not affected by your opponent's card effects that would restrict its attack target. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon one 'Machine Suit' Token (Machine-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 500) in Defense Position. [spoiler=Effect]This card cannot declare an attack. When this card is attacked, skip Damage Calculation and destroy this card. This card cannot be placed face-down on the Field. This card can be Tribute Summoned in Defense Mode. This face-up card can not be selected as an attack target when there is another face-up Monster on your side of the Field. Once per turn, you may pay 800 Life Points to roll a six-sided die. If the number is 5 or 6, inflict 1600 damage to your opponent's Life Points. [spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the Field when you have at least one 'Divine Rain Heavy Cannonry' on your side of the Field. You may only activate one Continuous Spell card with "Muntions" in its card name per turn. Select a 'Divine Rain Heavy Cannonry' on your side of the Field that did not activate its effect that turn. Pay 1000 Life Points and destroy up to three Monster Cards on your opponent's side of the Field. [spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the Field when you have at least one 'Divine Rain Heavy Cannonry' on your side of the Field. You may only activate one Continuous Spell card with "Muntions" in its card name per turn. Select a 'Divine Rain Heavy Cannonry' on your side of the Field that did not activate its effect that turn. Pay 1000 Life Points and destroy up to three Spell or Trap Cards on your opponent's side of the Field. [spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the Field when you have at least one 'Divine Rain Heavy Cannonry' on your side of the Field. You may only activate one Continuous Spell card with "Muntions" in its card name per turn. Select a 'Divine Rain Heavy Cannonry' on your side of the Field that did not activate its effect that turn. Discard two Monster Cards from your hand and discard the top five cards of your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otaku-sama Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Reviews anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bassa Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 The Pictures on some of them are great and some are bad. I like the effects a lot so i give the set 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Divine Rain Heavy Cannonry's pic isn't cool. like effects and can't see ocg.rate 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 All UP'd, except for Artificial Soldier, which is a reasonable beater. They really need to have more of a purpose IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otaku-sama Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Well, I made these with creativity and OCG correctness in mind more than an actual use. Anything wrong with the OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 I don't really care about OCG. But I believe Field should be without the capital, and so should Monster unless it's Monster Card. Also, x Stars isn't used in OCG iirc, Level x is instead. There might be some other things, that's what I got at a glance. Again, OCG isn't that important at this level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otaku-sama Posted February 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2010 Bumping... When anyone reviews, I'd appreciate it if you pointed out my OCG mistakes. It is the reason I made this thread in the first place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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