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My Star Wars Cards


StarWarsKid

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Welcome.

These cards are quite good for a new comer, especially if I take that most of them creating 9999 ATK/DEF Vanillas.

Although there're some errors you should fix:

1: Try to avoid fake-types, unless you're directly aiming to create a new, but in that case make sure your cards cannot be included in an already existing type. You can check it out here: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Type . Jedi, Sith, and your trooper cards are belongs to Warrior-type. Instead of creating fake-types, make them real type, and join them in an archetype (to learn more visit here: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Archetype )

2: Your OCG is quite good just few minor errors, like reduce=decrease, "in play"=remains/is face-up on the field, etc. These errors aren't quite the ones could be pointed out, just watch others cards, to learn more OCG.

All at all they're OK, 5.5-6/10

 

Check out my Star Wars set: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-173662.html

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