έκλειψη Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 So... I did a lot more scratching than I'm used to, but hey, gotta start somehow. I had this in another pose first, but I had to redo it to get the shading better. This makes Splice #4, and I'm hoping it's decent, unlike my previous attempts. I didn't quite know what to do with the eyes... So I was stupid and made them all black. Help with how to work the eyes would be appreciated. Anyways, I like slime. So I scratched some more. Even though it doesn't fit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 I don't see an image -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Where is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Crap. T.T I was uploading the image and testing the link when I pressed Post instead of Preview. Just a second, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 That's ok, we can wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Fix'd. Yeah... Not the best looking thing, but meh. I used a Forretress for the main body. I had another saved version that was more cropped, but it wouldn't upload. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Omg, I'm gonna have some nightmares tonight O.OAbout the sprite: It's pretty good, but disturbing. Why is the one on the right throwing up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jord200 Posted February 17, 2010 Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 wow. 0_0 thats actually really good. heck I would put that in the 5th generation. by what is coming out of that 1 head? puke or a Grimer? 0_0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EHN. Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 *I get nightmare* Well, It's good. Actually its awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Its like a weirdly constructed Zombie version of Weezing. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted February 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Thanks!This one turned out better than I expected. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cozmosus Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 I dislike it. Here are some tips for you to make it better.Don't colour everything the same colour. It looks plain, and doesn't let the sprite pop out. You should change the colour of the smoke back to the original colour.The eyes should be white. It doesn't have to have two colours; just white with ordinary pupils. That way it doesn't look unfinished.Don't be afraid to scratch. You need to add more bumps to the Fortress face. It should match more to the Wheezing evolution line look that you're looking for.Reshade. Look at Koffing and Wheezing. Check out their shading style and try to mimic that. You messed up the shading above the eye on the middle face.The puke seems to be unfinished and muddled up. You need to re-sprite the it. redraw it in purple, and copy the style that Muk is drawn in. You should then get the effect you want.I also see that you tried to scratch a mini ball. It needs the same lumps that the others have. For the stems, you should use a lighter purple. Don't forgrt to shade. If you don't have shading it will lok 2D, and won't match the rest of the sprite.That's all for now. Try to fix these problems. You will become better at spriting, and will be on your way to becoming a master spriter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 i think its amazing, very cool *claps* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted February 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Thanks, YCMaker#2! At least I'm improving. I'll make sure to use the info you've given me....For some reason, I wanna take on Marriland and Viktor with Lopunnies... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cozmosus Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 You're welcome! I hope this helps!(HA! I beat Jappio to the extremely long amount of tips for better spriting!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 This is boss. Super cool, love the concept, the third head, the barfing head. So boss. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted February 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Thanks! I'm still working on it to upload the version with YCM's advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cozmosus Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Call me YCM#2, so people don't get confused. I'm thinking of changing my name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Oops. When I first saw your username I did think you were a side account for YCMaker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 This makes splicing a form of art. Just the texture of the skin with the black eyes make it a beautiful masterpiece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 I know you don't want to hear the same advice again, so I'll add one thing. You probably shouldn't copy-paste parts. The left and right heads are pretty much exactly the same. Same with the mini ball things. Try to show more effort by making each part unique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G-Break Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 *Amazed, jaw drop* cooles sprite i've ever seen.. :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 This is awful. :/ First of all, the size must be either 64x64 or 80x80, else you're not doing Pokémon any more. Secondly, this isn't a fakemon at all, it's a spam of Koffing and Weezing parts with a bit of badly placed Muk. Your outlines are off in a lot of places, and the anatomy is impossible, as there's no way it could stay in the air. The lack of eyes is a stupid idea as it takes it far too away from the previous stages, plus it looks like a Weezing with another part, which is hardly what they'll do again for another evo which shouldn't happen anyway with such an awesome evo line. 3: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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