Gemini Counter Card -- Pure Awesomness -- Twins -- Comments Appreciated

[Twin Seed]

My brother's been beating me in yugioh lately with a new gemini deck he got, so I decided to make a card to sorta counter them.

 

[spoiler=Original]

Activate this card when your opponent Summons a Gemini Monster. Select 1 monster your opponent controls and Special Summon 1 card from your hand or Deck equal to or lower than the Level of the selected monster (you cannot conduct your Battle Phase next turn). During your opponent's End Phase, while this card is in your Graveyard, pay 300 Life Points. If you cannot, remove this card from play. While this card is removed from play, you can only activate 1 Spell Card per turn.

 

 

[spoiler=New]

Activate this card when your opponent Summons a Gemini Monster. Select 1 monster your opponent controls and Special Summon 1 card from your hand or Deck equal to or lower than the Level of the selected monster. During your opponent's End Phase, while this card is in your Graveyard, pay 100 Life Points. If you cannot, remove this card from play. While this card is removed from play, both players can only activate 1 Normal Spell Card per turn.

 

[Brimtosis]

This is a card that counters it, but not realy, if you know what I mean. All it does is help you summon a monster, and then you have a world of hurt put on you. And one part is worded strangely. It should be:

'Select 1 monster your opponent controls. Special Summon 1 card from your hand or Deck that has the same Level or lower, of the selected monster. If you do so, you cannot conduct your Battle Phase next turn.'

 

so, it has to be a 7.5/10

[Twin Seed]

I'm not sure about no parenthesis, but you've got it worded wrong. Thanks anyway.

[Yankee]

I'd never use it.

Not a good card..

Underpowered..you get a monster, and then nothing but pain..=/

[byak]

I'd never use it.

Not a good card..

Underpowered..you get a monster' date=' and then nothing but pain..=/

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This.

[Twin Seed]

Hmm, good point....I'll fix it now.

[Phanax Leminer]

Aiku: I shall give this patient a Double Personality Disorder.

 

OCG: Already point out by 174.

 

Effect: The effect is just pain. I believe that Trigger Summon could be better than this card. A very burn effect and doesn't worth to be played even against Gemini Monster.

 

Image and Name: Good link with the card's name and effect, but lacks of connections with the effect.

 

Overall: 4.2/10

[Twin Seed]

Edited. And the name AND pic fit the effect.

[ragnarok1945]

did you mean 1000 LP?

 

Because 100 LP is WAY to small

 

the OCG correction is up already, and other than should 100 be 1000, everything else looks just fine

 

9.5/10