Maiden of Warfare

[TOMY_25]

Just another attempt...

Image credit to JiniChu from Deviantart.

 

 

Lore:

When this face-up card is destroyed while equipped with an Equip Spell Card that increases this card's ATK by 500 or higher (max. 1000), you can Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster with 2500 or less ATK from your Deck. This card's effect is negated when it is Special Summoned.

 

Enjoy, Comment, Correct, and Rate.

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

Once only, while this face-up card you control is destroyed while equipped with an Equip Spell Card that increases this card's ATK by 500 or more (max.1000), you can Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster with 2000 ATK or less from your Deck. This card cannot be Special Summoned.

 

ocg is slightly off, fix is above. i can see this having SOME uses. im guessing the less is meant to be more?

there are better cards to SS monsters though that dont require you to -1 yourself. not being Special Summonable makes it kind up'd.

 

7/10

[TOMY_25]

Thanks. IMO, enabling this card to be Special Summoned would make this card OP'ed. For the fix, I'll change it. I made it '500 or less' because of the possibility with "Fighting Spirit", and also the limit by 1000.

[Sephiroth_The_Legend]

i was thinking in terms of decent equips like United We Stand and Mage Power.

 

it wouldnt make it op'd, but it would be a nice bonus.

dont forget, apart from it dying and SSing a monster, its just a 1700 beatstick, so being able to SS itself would be easily acceptable.

[TOMY_25]

i was thinking in terms of decent equips like United We Stand and Mage Power.

 

it wouldnt make it op'd' date=' but it would be a nice bonus.

dont forget, apart from it dying and SSing a monster, its just a 1700 beatstick, so being able to SS itself would be easily acceptable.

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OK. How about I remove the SS restriction but instead negates the ability to SS monster from the Deck if this card is SS'ed. Also, change the 'less' to 'more'. What do you think?

[.:Shaymin:.]

OCG is slightly off

 

Good Pic

 

7/10

[TOMY_25]

OCG is slightly off

 

Good Pic

 

7/10

 

Thanks for rating, just wondering if you can show the part of the OCG that is slightly off, I appreciate your comment.

[M.B X]

OCG Fix: This card cannot be Special Summoned. While this face-up card you control is destroyed while equipped with an Equip Spell Card that increases this card's ATK by 500 or more (max.1000), you can Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster with an ATK of 2000 or less from your Deck. This effect can only be used once per duel.

 

Cute image, balanced card and effect. My Rating...

 

Creativity: 7/10.

Balance: 8/10.

 

Average: 6.5/10

[TOMY_25]

OCG Fix: This card cannot be Special Summoned. While this face-up card you control is destroyed while equipped with an Equip Spell Card that increases this card's ATK by 500 or more (max.1000)' date=' you can Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster with an ATK of 2000 or less from your Deck. This effect can only be used once per duel.

 

Cute image, balanced card and effect. My Rating...

 

Creativity: 7/10.

Balance: 8/10.

 

Average: 6.5/10

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Thanks. I'll fix it.

[ragnarok1945]

to me once per duel is a bit too low

 

not that it doesn't have any uses, but effect too rare. Make it like once every few turns or something

 

7/10

[TOMY_25]

to me once per duel is a bit too low

 

not that it doesn't have any uses' date=' but effect too rare. Make it like once every few turns or something

 

7/10

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Thanks. Actually this card's effect can only be activated if it is Normal summoned.

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Fixed. Plus, I've made some changes.

[ragnarok1945]

well that'll make it better, I'll raise my rate to 8/10 then

[TOMY_25]

well that'll make it better' date=' I'll raise my rate to 8/10 then

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Thanks.

[Archelaus]

Fix: When this card is destroyed while equipped with an Equip Spell Card that increases this card's ATK by 500 or higher (max. 1000), you can Special Summon 1 Warrior-type monster with 2000 or less ATK from your Deck. This card's effect is negated when it is Special Summoned.

 

Underpowered. Its effect would hardly be used. Increase the Limit of ATK that can be Special Summoned to 2500.

[TOMY_25]

Fix: When this card is destroyed while equipped with an Equip Spell Card that increases this card's ATK by 500 or higher (max. 1000)' date=' you can Special Summon 1 Warrior-type monster with 2000 or less ATK from your Deck. This card's effect is negated when it is Special Summoned.

 

Underpowered. Its effect would hardly be used. Increase the Limit of ATK that can be Special Summoned to 2500.

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Thanks for the fix. I'm not sure whether changing the limit from 2000 to 2500 would make this card OP'ed, but I'll try.

[Archelaus]

Using its effect i already too much of a hassle. Your losing 2 cards for 1 card. It'd be balanced.

[TOMY_25]

Using its effect i already too much of a hassle. Your losing 2 cards for 1 card. It'd be balanced.

 

OK, I got the point but what about 'Horn of the Unicorn'?

[Archelaus]

It blocks your next draw. Horn of the Unicorn is bad card.

[TOMY_25]

It blocks your next draw. Horn of the Unicorn is bad card.

 

Mmm...you're right about that. OK, it's up to others to decide.

[Guest Zeonark]

100 more and Buster Blader would've been lulzy with this. I think.

 

Eh. I find it somewhat underpowered because like everyone said, you're -1ing yourself.

 

This is my opinion/suggestion, I'd take off the effect negating part. I'm not sure if it'd balance it out or not, but it would be better to just me that way.

 

Other than that, this is decent.

[TOMY_25]

100 more and Buster Blader would've been lulzy with this. I think.

 

Eh. I find it somewhat underpowered because like everyone said' date=' you're -1ing yourself.

 

This is my opinion/suggestion, I'd take off the effect negating part. I'm not sure if it'd balance it out or not, but it would be better to just me that way.

 

Other than that, this is decent.

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OK, I get it. Thanks anyway.

[M.B X]

BTW - These are 3 powerful monsters you can bring out using this card's effect:

 

 

 

 

Not soo under-powered now huh?

[Archelaus]

BTW - These are 3 powerful monsters you can bring out using this card's effect:

 

 

 

 

 

 

Not soo under-powered now huh?

 

The amount of set-up you need to use its effect is hard enough. [s/T Removal][monster removal]

 

Only Shogun Shien is useful there, the others are lolbeatsticks.

 

Not so overpowered, huh?

[TOMY_25]

BTW - These are 3 powerful monsters you can bring out using this card's effect:

 

 

 

 

Not soo under-powered now huh?

 

I'm not sure about 'Guardian of Order' but I do impressed when you mention 'Great Shogun Shien".

[-Griffin]

ITT: People quoting a series of images without putting them in a spoiler/removing the images to shorten the page

 

A bit of a shame that the two best Equips don't increase ATK.

I suppose it gains some use with the new list, if Gemini Warriors can actually find a use for it, or as some mediocre searcher in Ben Kei. The -1 is a pain, but with the March list, UWS might mean that this destroys something, and then gets to search, so a nice +0.