Nmaster Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 I did my best,can someone rate them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nmaster Posted February 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 I did my best,any comments,someone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G-Break Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 special summoned=Special Summonedattack points=ATKnormal summoned=Normal Summonedsummon=Summondragon type= Dragon-Typeone=1 1st card effect, i think it's okay2nd card effect, Special Summon from where? Overused Pics overall 6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted February 18, 2010 Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 pictures are overused but that doesnt matter. here's the OCG fix for both your cards. Card 1 If this card is Normal Summoned, add 1 card from your Graveyard to your hand. If this card is Special Summoned, increase this card's ATK by 200. Normal Summoning effects always come before the Special Summoning ones. the effect itself is a little op'ed as adding any card to hand from your grave is too easily abusable. i would add a Cost or a drawback to make it more balanced. Card 2 If this card is destroyed by a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your Deck. this is simpler and easier to work with. i would drop it to level 6 and decrease its ATK and DEF to something like 2300 / 2000 to make it much more playable. overall, not a bad effort. keep it up. 7.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nmaster Posted February 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2010 Thanks for the good rating,maybe you are right with the effect of the first one,but you add the card to your deck,not to your hand! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 both pics are overused, but you're new so I'll let that go capitalization errors have been pointed out, and the effects are too small 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrid97 Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 An alright card for a someone new so its alright and you get,6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephiroth_The_Legend Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Thanks for the good rating' date='maybe you are right with the effect of the first one,but you add the card to your deck,not to your hand![/quote'] oops, i just assumed it was hand, ok, well ill change the fix then pictures are overused but that doesnt matter. here's the OCG fix for both your cards. Card 1 If this card is Normal Summoned' date=' add 1 card from your Graveyard to your Deck. If this card is Special Summoned, increase this card's ATK by 200. Normal Summoning effects always come before the Special Summoning ones. the effect itself is a quite balanced really as alot of people are against deck thinning but it does give the option to re-use any card you like, but more often than not, people wouldnt run this for the sole reason it returns cards to the deck.Card 2 If this card is destroyed by a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your Deck. this is simpler and easier to work with. i would drop it to level 6 and decrease its ATK and DEF to something like 2300 / 2000 to make it much more playable. overall, not a bad effort. keep it up. 7.4/10[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Where are my COOKIES Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 special summoned=Special Summonedattack points=ATKnormal summoned=Normal Summonedsummon=Summondragon type= Dragon-Typeone=1 1st card effect' date=' i think it's okay2nd card effect, Special Summon from where? overall 7/10[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nmaster Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Changed the OCG! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Thanks for the good rating' date='maybe you are right with the effect of the first one,but you add the card to your deck,not to your hand![/quote'] That doesn't mean that it's completely balanced. Especially in a Lightsworn deck(Or Zombies. Possibly.). Anyway, first one is decent. But I feel like the two effects were just slapped together. But that's just me. The Second one is... possibly abusable? Depending on certain Dragon decks. I have no idea. Even if I hate Dragons, these are decent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Pics are OU (OverUsed).OCG just seems wrong.1st Effect is simple, but not to powerfull.2nd Effect is ballanced, though to the 2 Tributed needed to Summon it.A 8.5/10, + new player bonus.Btw, Like your avi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nmaster Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Thanks for all the comments,I hope that I can use them to become a good card creator,and from what site I need to find pics? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Well, If you found them on Deviantart, that would be a good site.But you coinsidently chose the pics that are frequently used in this section. But it can happen to the best of uss. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nmaster Posted February 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Indeed,i used Deviantart for this pics,I will maker new cards later btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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