Ice Angel Egoz [with Ghost Rare]

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well credit image to Jazin Kay :]

Ghost Rare

 

 

Lore:

When this card Summoned, you can remove 2 WATER monsters in your Graveyard from play, this card can attack all opponent's monsters once. If you choose to do this, any battle damage this card inflicts become 0. Once per turn select 1 WATER monster that is removed from play and return it to your Graveyard to inflict 400 damage to your opponent, this card cannot attack during the turn this effect is activated.

 

CnC please

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Ocg errors D:

 

Add "You can" to the last effect, otherwise you won't be able to attack with it at all.

 

I love the Ghost effect. :)

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yeah i see, doubled effect, it seems make me confused too

lol

i'll fix it later

that ghost rare i think doesn't look so good :[

well thanks anyway

[Lexadin]

Pic is kinda squished.

OCG fix: When this card Summoned, you can remove 2 WATER monsters in your Graveyard from play, this card can attack all opponent's monsters once. If you choose to do this, any battle damage this card inflicts become 0. Once per turn select 1 WATER monster that is removed from play and return it to your Graveyard to inflict 400 damage to your opponent, this card cannot attack during the turn this effect is activated.

Name is ok.

Ghost Rare looks bad.

Effect is simple but effective, maybe a tad Up in the burn effect, you should make it a bigger burn.

A 8.1/10

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Pic is kinda squished.

OCG fix: When this card Summoned' date=' you can remove 2 WATER monsters in your Graveyard from play, this card can attack all opponent's monsters once. If you choose to do this, any battle damage this card inflicts become 0. Once per turn select 1 WATER monster that is removed from play and return it to your Graveyard to inflict 400 damage to your opponent, this card cannot attack during the turn this effect is activated.[/b']

Name is ok.

Ghost Rare looks bad.

Effect is simple but effective, maybe a tad Up in the burn effect, you should make it a bigger burn.

A 8.1/10

 

thanks, will fix it xp

well i need more practice to ghost rare-ing << wrong OCG

[ragnarok1945]

OCG should be When this card is Summoned successfully, you can release 2 WATER monsters from your Graveyard to have this card attack all of your opponent's monsters on the field. If you activate this effect, this card cannot inflict Battle Damage to your opponent this turn.

 

the rest of it seems fine, though I find the burn damage a bit small. You should make it 700 instead

 

8.6/10

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Thanks!! what is the different of release and send?

[emperor 217]

8/10

like ghost rare

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thanks, i can do it, just come to my shop when you want ghost rare for your card :]

 

CnC people?

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Thanks!! what is the different of release and send?

Release and Advance Summon were supposed to replace Tribute and Tribute Summon as how you summon a lvl 6 or higher monster, but Konami realized how stupid it sounded and left it as Tribute and Tribute Summon in the TCG. As a result, Release is not correct OCG for English cards. And even if it was, it would not be appropriate for this case; send is correct for your purposes.

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Thanks!! what is the different of release and send?

Release and Advance Summon were supposed to replace Tribute and Tribute Summon as how you summon a lvl 6 or higher monster' date=' but Konami realized how stupid it sounded and left it as Tribute and Tribute Summon in the TCG. As a result, Release is not correct OCG for English cards. And even if it was, it would not be appropriate for this case; send is correct for your purposes.

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yeah, i guess it so before ragna advice to change into release.. :]

thanks

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[wero-vasto]

It's my time to see your work here....

 

The effects is great, but you need to increase the burn effect a little...

 

in other hand... well... you need to add "You can" to the last effector he will never attack while you have WATER monster removed from play...

 

the ghost rare is ... meh =/ you did better in my card ^^

 

8.7/10

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It's my time to see your work here....

 

The effects is great' date=' but you need to increase the burn effect a little...

 

in other hand... well... you need to add "You can" to the last effector he will never attack while you have WATER monster removed from play...

 

the ghost rare is ... meh =/ you did better in my card ^^

 

8.7/10

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LOL.. i forget the step of making Ghost Rare!! I should write in my note when i'm doing it again xp

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I'd make one small change to the effect, but that's just me.

 

When this card Summoned, you can remove 2 WATER monsters in your Graveyard from play. This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls during the same Battle Phase. If you choose to do this, any Battle Damage this card inflicts become 0. Once per turn select 1 WATER monster that is removed from play and return it to your Graveyard to inflict 400 damage to your opponent's Life Points, this card cannot attack during the turn this effect is activated.

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Idk, I like how this sounds. Not sure how the last effect should be worded, sorry. :(

 

When this card Summoned, you can remove 2 WATER monsters in your Graveyard from play. If you do, until the End Phase, any battle damage involving this card becomes 0 and it can attack all your opponent's monsters once each. Once per turn, you can select 1 of your WATER monsters that is removed from play and return it to the Graveyard to inflict 400 damage to your opponent, this card cannot attack during the turn this effect is activated.