Clair Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 [align=center]Hey guys. This is my first card, so be merciful, okay? ^^ I hope it's YCM acceptable! Effect: When this card is Tribute Summoned, flip all face-down Defense Position monsters on the field face-up. Flip Effects are not activated at this time. This card gains 100 ATK for each card flipped face-up by this effect. During your End Phase, decrease the ATK of this card by 300 points.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 No matter what, to be honest, if we're merciful then your understandability of making the cards balanced with flawless OCG wouldn't improve drastically. The effect is pretty good for eliminating flip effect monsters thus making it a pretty useful asset. The card isn't overpowered, but tends to be leaning more on the underpowered side since what are your chances of having loads or more than 2 face-down monsters on the field anyways. The OCG is pretty flawless and the effect is agreeable but the only problem I see is the picture; look at the top right hand corner and you'll see the website that it was from. Try to crop your pictures more and eliminate unnecessary words that don't coincide with the picture. Overall, for a first card, this is pretty outstanding work. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Thanks Redxcode! And I was just being sarcastic about the whole "mercy" thing. -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 No worries I just always give my most honest opinions so yep if it had offended you then I'm sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 That's okay. At least you took the time to rate my card honestly, so we're cool. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Honoo-drago? Does he come from a land called Honoo-lee? I guess he could be a Magic Dragon, but he doesn't seem like he'd be a fan of the beach. This card probably isn't the best for a standard Dragon Deck, but it's good tech against Worm. Still, most people would just run Ceasefire and be done with it. Still, it's a solid card and very good for a first try, so 8/10. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Honoo is Japanese for "flame". '^^ And Ceasefire is a better card, but it's Limited. Thank you for your rate. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Honoo is Japanese for "flame". O I C. Thank you for the edumacation. I'll be off now, happy cardmaking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 No problem. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 very impressive for a first card the effect may not be original, but I see nothing imbalanced about it it's a shame it doesn't have an effect for while it's on the field, but whatever I'll give this 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 Pretty darn good for a first card. The only OCG mistake I see is that you should remove "points" from the end. Other than that, it's a decent, balanced, and creative card. overall - 11.67/13.69 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted February 23, 2010 Report Share Posted February 23, 2010 OCG FIX: Remove points Seriously, the picture doesn't look like a Monster Card image. It looks better as a S/T Card image but I don't rate GFX/pics, only the effects, so its fine. The effect is good for a first card, but if you want to survive here, better make more amusing and better effects. As of now, the effect is kind of dull. 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted March 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2010 Thanks guys. ^^ I will definitely improve with all of your support! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted March 1, 2010 Report Share Posted March 1, 2010 "This card gains 100 ATK for each monster flipped by it's effect."That's the only fix, and well, I feel the last drawback unnecessary, cuz this monster effect only activate when Tribute Summoned, just like a Monarch, and well, the last effect could make it UPed...Balanced it more making the increase for just your opponent monsters. Great First Card! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted March 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2010 I'm not sure I understand the last part of your comment, but thanks anyway. ^^ I really did NOT want to make this card OP'd, as I've heard that's a common mistake here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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