My First Synchro card!

[skullbook]

My newest creation! and for surely there Demons xD! Enjoy!

 

 

What ya think?!

[Hass Mac]

great cards and nice effect but i think you shoud pimp the attak of your synchro monster just a bit

8.9/10:D

[MarshyK-XS]

pics = could be better

Ocg Fix = When this card is Synchro Summoned, once, during the Damage Step you can double this card's ATK.

 

Meh

4.9 / 10

 

~MK

[skullbook]

Okay i updated the Pic's hope u like these more and i fixed Ocg and i pimped ATK of "berserker Demon" so maybe this is better that 4.9/10?

[~Oleon~]

Woahohoho...

That would make 6000 ATK in the Damage Step. Have you heard of swarming?

Blackwings+These Two=Stronger than Twilight+the Egyptian Gods+Horakhty+Armityle, with a little exaggeration. But seriously, you could knock all the teeth out of your opponent on the first turn with these cards.

[skullbook]

Woahohoho...

That would make 6000 ATK in the Damage Step. Have you heard of swarming?

Blackwings+These Two=Stronger than Twilight+the Egyptian Gods+Horakhty+Armityle' date=' with a little exaggeration. But seriously, you could knock all the teeth out of your opponent on the first turn with these cards.

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Okay i eddited it again please say this is better.

[~Oleon~]

OCG error located:

The ATK of this card becomes 4500 until the End Phase.

 

I think Shadow Demon should have some more complexity, its effect is a bit bland at the moment.

 

ッOleonッ

[Ayasato-chan]

My advice:

- Add to the cost. Make it cost you three monsters ("Shadow Demon" + 2 or more non Tuner monsters)

- OCG fix: When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, during your Battle Phase, you can increase the ATK of this card by 1500 during the Damage Step only.

[~Oleon~]

I agree with two.

*cough*

The Tricky

*cough*

[Guest Cursed Reaction]

I still find that extremely overpowered. 4500 ATK to play with is a powerful force and since no-one would or can use Egyptian God Cards (not including the legal ones, because you just can't use them well), Beserker Demon could be the strongest monster in the game. OCG already fixed but the effect is bland.

[MarshyK-XS]

your rating will always be low if you don't try to make the effects more complex, even if there are ocg errors you will get higher ratings for making it more complex. Also the pics are terrible, try a site like deviant art which has a lot of awesome pics and is where i get almost all of my card images

 

just a thought

 

~MK

[bakupenguin]

great cards! just 1000 atk directly? make it, "You can have this card lose 300 ATK to attack your opponent directly, until the end phase."

 

8/10

[~Oleon~]

I still find that extremely overpowered. 4500 ATK to play with is a powerful force and since no-one would or can use Egyptian God Cards (not including the legal ones' date=' because you just can't use them well), [b']Beserker Demon could be the strongest monster in the game.[/b] OCG already fixed but the effect is bland.

 

*cough*

Armityle, anyone?

 

 

Anyways, we all know the effect is bland. Now I need to go shut my dog up from barking at the cats on camera.

[Expelsword]

This card is not overpowered enough to be a realistic synchro

[Guest Cursed Reaction]

@Expersword: That makes no sense what so ever. You are saying to make it even more overpowered...(?)

[Expelsword]

exactly, it was a jab at synchro monsters like Stardust Dragon, Ally of Justice Catastor, and Goyo Guardian and the like

who are all ridiculous

[ragnarok1945]

Berserk Demon's effect is too powerful. It has 3000 atk already, boosting it all the way up to 4500 is just plain too much.

 

If you boost it to just 3500, I'd have accepted it. And even so, just boosting atk is too boring for a synchro monster, give it another effect

 

the same is true for Shadow Demon, attacking directly along is dull, give it another effect

 

7/10

[~Oleon~]

This card is not overpowered enough to be a realistic synchro

 

Hey' date=' Expelsword! From Yugiohnetwork!

 

 

Berserk Demon's effect is too powerful. It has 3000 atk already, boosting it all the way up to 4500 is just plain too much.

 

If you boost it to just 3500, I'd have accepted it. And even so, just boosting atk is too boring for a synchro monster, give it another effect

 

the same is true for Shadow Demon, attacking directly along is dull, give it another effect

 

7/10

 

I agree with Rag, give Shadow Demon another effect. You could keep Beserker Demon the way it is, just with a small added drawback, and make Shadow Demon, say, Level 1. Because with this you have a great little OTK on your hands.

 

 

Special Summon The Tricky

Summon Shadow Demon

Synch for Beserker

4500 ATK - Boom.

[Guest Zeonark]

Did you actually say "ur" in the text for the Synchro? *Facepalm*

Change it to "your" please.

 

I don't get Shadow Demon. So if it gets attacked while in Attack Position, THEN it can attack directly?

Eh. Never heard of that before. So points for originality and balance.

 

That Synchro is actually balanced. Needs 3 monsters, like Silverwind and other Synchros. It's effect doesn't make it go over 4500, but rather, forces it to 4500. Thankfully, it goes back down afterwards. But to balance it out further, I'd change it to:

"During your Battle Phase, if this card attacks, this cards ATK becomes 4500 until the end of the Damage Calculation." Or whatever step it was.

I'm not totally sure if that's balanced for a Level 8 Synchro.

 

Meh.

[~Oleon~]

Ah. He changed it again, the pics are still bad, though. It has Black Borders on the Synchro, use Paint to get it right.

 

"once during ur battle phase"

...

As said, change to "your".

 

OCG correction:

"Shadow Demon"+2 or more non-Tuner monsters.

During the turn that this card is Synchro Summoned, when it attacks, increase its ATK to 4500 until the End Phase.

 

There we go.

Also, making that Tuner 4-stars was clever, for now the other monsters have to be either:

3x Lv.1

1x Lv.3 1x Lv.1

2x Lv.2

 

 

Which are all low levels, so, smart move.