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The topic may be funny, but the effect is serious. Sry for new type, couldn't really do anything else.

 

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lore:Period + Period + Period

During your battle phase, you can pay 1000 life points to have one monster attack all of your opponent's monsters. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can special summon up to 3 "Period"s from your graveyard.

 

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lore:When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard, you can equip it to an opponent's monster as an equip spell card. The equipped monster's ATK is halved. If you do so, special summon one "half-word" token (LIGHT/level 4/ pencil-type/ATK?/DEF?) to your side of the field. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to half of the equipped monster's original ATK and DEF. If the equipped monster is destroyed, remove this card from play.

 

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lore:Comma + Colon

This monster can attack twice during the battle phase. Increase this monster's ATK by 100 for each pencil-type monster on the field. When this card is destroyed by battle, special summon one "Comma" and one "Period" from your Hand or Deck.

 

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lore:When this card is Summoned, put 3 Question Counters on this card. Each turn that this card is on the field, you must flip 2 coins. If both are heads, put 1 Question Counter on this card. If both are tails, Remove one Question Counter from this card. If one is heads and one is tails, then draw one card. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Question Counters on it.

 

Plz rate! 8)

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i give you a 4/5 it would be a 3/5 but i like how you made a different type which shows creativity, by the way its just in my opinion this didn't effect you but i would make those really weak monsters like really weak. you didnt add how much question marks attack goes up for each counter ether. That is all keep it up

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You're missing capitalization all over the place. All types are capitalized (Pencil / Effect, not pencil / Effect), and you'd get docked heavy for that.

 

Since visuals are in need of the most improvement, though, I'll tell you this straight up. Don't invent the Pencil-type, it's too ridiculous. Give them an archtype, like: "Pencil - Period" or "Punctuation - Period". Something like that. Then give each one a different type. I know card-creators in Pokemon made "Hack" cards, and I'd say you could also make "Hacked - Period" or something, which would give you leave to put any type and Attribute (making these guys all LIGHT just doesn't fit... I was thinking a lot of Psychic-Type DARK monsters).

 

All in all: Variation is necessary.

 

As for your pictures.... well... they're in sore need of help. What would be cool is if you typed up 3 or so sentences in WordArt using 1 of every punctuation mark, and then took pictures of your screen (with PrtScn) and divided them up so that you could see the punctuation mark in the center of the pic with some letters below/above/wherever. That'd give you leave to make your pictures colorful, and you can even give them a background with something off Photobucket or Deviantart.

 

But that's all I've got. Get to work.

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I like fake types, they add more creativity, i dont like regular types, but of course, i still use real types, anyway, it is good, except the pics, and know XCATLY what u did rong, but other wise, 8/10, (these arent joke cards, havent you guys heard of creativity?)

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