♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 [align=center]Hope you Enjooy Zeaux ^^! If this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon it during your next Main Phase 2. Once per turn, during your opponent's turn negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card and destroy it. Then send 1 Zombie-Type monster from your hand or Deck to the Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to your "Despair Dragon" as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK. While this card is equipped to a face-up "Despair Dragon" each time a Zombie-Type monster is sent directly from your hand or Deck to the Graveyard by a card effect, you can Special Summon that monster. When this card is unequipped, destroy all monsters Special Summoned by this card's effect. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.) <(^^)> Hug if ya Love![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 interesting to see you going into the zombie types, LLD both there's no OCG errors, pics are both excellent, where did you get them? personally I still like the first one better, but I'll give this 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted March 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Thanks ^^ and I got both images from Jazin Kay's Archives Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 I'm not surprised. Tell me LLD, are you pulling virtually ALL the card pics for your cards there now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted March 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Almost all. I occasionally use some of my own images ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Frontline Base Bombing xD. Unsure on balance but excellent ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 To me ? Aaaah, I love you! <3 First one is just so awesome to my eyes. Simple and great additions to the Zombies. I would only remove the "Zixufore" Gain ATK, because it already gain this same amount of ATK when equipped. So, it would gain 1000 ATK, making it over powered. Good to see it have 1200 DEF, so it can be searched by Goblin Zombie. Zixufore... maybe a little over powered. You can Summon almost any Zombie from your Deck using the effect of Despair Dragon. Maybe restrict it to Level 4, idk. Love them Ashley. <3 Rate~ 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted March 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 =D!!! Both Icy and Zeaux like them? x3!!!! Eeek! Thanks both and will do Zeaux ^^ <3 lol I actually thought about the Zixufore effect being OP but then I thought of those cards that do that same thing except its just when they destroy them so I thought it was balanced so I'll wait to see if 1 more person notes that before I edit ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 Maybe adding Big Piece Golem's effect to Despair Dragon would it easier to summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 Hmm, I think the effect of sending Zombies from the Deck to the Graveyard may be overpowered; you know, as Zombies, some of them work better in the graveyard than in the hand. The Dragon it's like an unlimited Foolish Burial+Dark Bribe (without the drawback) made monster. And if you really are desperate, you can negate your own Spell/Traps to send Zombies to the grave. As for the Union, well, If I am not mistaken, it wouldn't work with the effect of Despair in the first place, because the monster send Zombies to the Graveyard as a cost, not effect; the same is true for other cards that require discarding as cost. However, this card does work well with the aforementioned Foolish, with Armageddon Knight and the milling effect of "Lightsworns". So, I give it a 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted March 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 As for the Union' date=' well, If I am not mistaken, it wouldn't work with the effect of Despair in the first place, because the monster send Zombies to the Graveyard as a cost, not effect[/b'] So, I give it a 7/10. Fixed card 1. This is no longer an issue now :3 Thanks for pointing that out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted March 3, 2010 Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 Has anyone realized that the 2nd card can never be equipped to the first but me? Everyone is so lazy and don't even bother to read the lore any more. At least I may be able to offer constructive criticism. Despair Dragon: Ugh, I hate this so much. I fear it is OPed as it will always come back again and again and you can do nothing to stop it. If you changed the effect so that it was removed from play when it was destroyed whilst Special Summoned however, then we would have a very different story. Zixufore: UPed. It will never be equipped to Despair Dragon, as you was to lazy to go and get the correct lore. Your OCG: Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to your "Decayed Commander" as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. Yeah, you f**ked up. Big time. And onwards! Now, you have made a mega monstrosity. Let's see this, your gonna get this out, equip it to Despair, then Despair is gonna bring out itself again. Next turn your gonna bring out another Zixufore, and then your gonna go and get game because this card is just horribly overpowered like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted March 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2010 Has anyone realized that the 2nd card can never be equipped to the first but me? Everyone is so lazy and don't even bother to read the lore any more. At least I may be able to offer constructive criticism. Despair Dragon: Ugh' date=' I hate this so much. I fear it is OPed as it will always come back again and again and you can do nothing to stop it. If you changed the effect so that it was removed from play when it was destroyed whilst Special Summoned however, then we would have a very different story.[/quote']A simple Trap Hole would suffice. Or Dark World Lightning. Or Widespread Ruin. OR Skill Drain and an attack Zixufore: UPed. It will never be equipped to Despair Dragon' date=' as you was to lazy to go and get the correct lore. Your OCG: Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip [b']it to your "Decayed Commander" as an Equip Card[/b], OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. Yeah, you f**ked up. Big time. And onwards! Now, you have made a mega monstrosity. Let's see this, your gonna get this out, equip it to Despair, then Despair is gonna bring out itself again. Next turn your gonna bring out another Zixufore, and then your gonna go and get game because this card is just horribly overpowered like that. Rather than make incorrect assumptions, you should ask why no one mentioned my error. I changed it. The first time i posted this i edited that (i copy pasted it from the lore of Zombie Tiger because I was to lazy to re-type it myself) but then I edited the effect and reposted the original (with edit) and forgot to edit that. So if you'd be so kind as to not arrogantly assume that people are ignorant, we can get along fine. You need to state why Zix is OP. And Despair can only bring itself out during the Main Phase 2 of your next turn and only if it was destroyed by battle which wont be an issue since your opponent will most likely realize that it'll keep coming back when it's destroyed by battle so they'll then target it with a card effect. Sooooo......I havent been convinced of Despair's OP or of Zix's flaws. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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