Rate My Yoshi's Story Boss Cards!

[RobotWarsLuver1]

[Lonk]

I will tell you what OCG errors you have made:

 

1. in a result of battle is supposed to be "as a result of battle"

2. life points are capitalized

3. I know you are trying to say for inviso "When this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step" right?

4. Instead of saying destroyed with, you can say "by the effects of"

5. Capitalization for Normal and Trap

 

Besides these errors, these cards look pretty good and are balanced (color the background of Baby Bowser for even more points!). Hope my advice helps:)

 

7.5/10

[RobotWarsLuver1]

It's been 3 months, and nobody else is gonna comment? Come on!