JIMMYTRON Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 [align=center]BECAUSE IF YOU DO...I HAVE WHAT HAS BEEN AILING YOU!![/align] [align=justify]Lore: 1 "Slime" or "Jam" Monster + 1 Level 3 or lower Warrior-Type MonsterDuring the turn that this card is Summoned, place 5 Slime Counters on this card (max. 5). If this card is attacked by a monster that your opponent controls, you can remove 1 Slime Counter from this card before Battle Damage is calculated. When 1 Slime Counter is removed, this card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle (Battle Damage is still calculated). When there are no Slime Counters on this card, increase the ATK of this card equal to the sum of the Battle Damage taken while this card was face-up on the field.[/align] ANOTHER JAPANESE CARD?! WHA?! [align=center][spoiler= [b]JAPANESE Version][/align]Secret Holo Credit: 25000st [align=right]Enjoy the fruits of my labor, JIMMYTRON[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 Shouldn't this be fusion type? Or Synchro? Anyway, I think it can get a bit OP'ed when you use the effect. Like, use of "Final Attack Orders" would go hand-in-hand with this card. Like, if you're up against a Blue-Eyes, A Stardust Dragon, and lets say Perfectly Ultimate Great Moth. Thats 2000, 1500, and 2500 damage right there, and thats just three. Thats 7000 ATK, and with 2 more chances. So, thats over 8000 ATK for this monster. The effect is very original, but the way you put it makes it OP'ed. Maybe just 3 counters? Or just one? Maybe raise the ATK a little? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Percival Cox Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 Pretty origonal effect. I'm not sure if there is a deck that runs Slime or Jam monsters though. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 this might be powerful enough to be a synchro, nice way to boost its atk, I like it that way though I'm unsure how well this can work with Revival Jam or monsters like that 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 Suraimu Naito? I like this card. Remove, remove, poof. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted March 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 OOps...i forgot the FUSION in the card...will fix!BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted March 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamora Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 i like the slimes but they are weak and hard to use 8/10 for this one tho good job its well thought out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted March 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 thanx both...are there any OCG errors? also, i have a good pic for a support card...should i post it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamora Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 yea post it and not a major OCG errors i can see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted March 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 will do...hold on a min though (have to find it again lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 nice card ;D i like the effect, like said before it it can become opgreat idea and nice pic... and how do u get the Japaneses, do u just use a translator? 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted March 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 MSEi use google translator, copy and paste the text in the desired areas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 OCG fix/simplification: 1 "Slime" or "Jam" monster + 1 Level 3 or lower Warrior-Type MonsterWhen this card is Summoned, place 5 Slime Counters on it (max. 5). If this card is attacked and would be destroyed by battle, you can remove 1 Slime Counter from this card instead (Damage calculation is applied normally). While there are no Slime Counters on this card, this card gains ATK equal to the sum of the Battle Damage you took while this card was face-up on the field. I think the last effect is OP'ed, because it takes the Battle Damage from ALL battles as ATK, not only from his battles. Because of that, your opponent has no choice but, besides destroying it with a card effect, to attack this card before it accumulates tons of ATK. Otherwise, if your opponent chooses to attack other monsters, this card would be still accumulating ATK from those battles. Now, if only this card could transform Battle Damage from HIS battles only as ATK, it would be balanced. Also, this card can be deadly with Battle Mania or All-Out Attacks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 Yea change effect so that it gains ATK from damage that IT takes. very creative, I think you're on to something. you could make a slime set based on the cards that already exist. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted March 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 GASP!! i might do that...i will have to fix SLIME KNIGHT firstTHANX 4 DA IDEA TDLOE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 Your welcome. PM me and we could make a set together. 4 STARS WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JIMMYTRON Posted March 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 congrats for ur 4th post on my thread lolzwill do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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