jreagles14 Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 This is my first attempt at making a card do go easy on critique but be specific in what I'm doing wrong. I want to get good at this thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 OCG fix - This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card gains 500 ATK for each face-up DARK monster on the field. 5.4 / 10 ~MK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 just say DARK monster, no need for the "attribute" in the text normal summoned or set should be Normal Summoned or Set given it has 2000 base atk already, 500 atk gain per DARK monster is too much, you should have made this card lv7 instead 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightm@re-X Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 lame sorry dude....4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 Just like everyone else, Card Grammer, and you should make this card level 7, or weaken it's attack. 3/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mjs best Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 its ok6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathghost101 Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 ....Isn't the pic some child eating clown guy from a movie........I forgot what the movie was called though.....I give it a 6/10 everyone said why already........up the level or lower the attack............. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dizzy~ Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 normall summoned should be Normal Summoned set should be Set field should be Field 8/10, it's just caps errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 OPi surprised no one else noticed, 2000 atk level 4 and can get up to be 4000 easy it is 2500 atk because it is a dark monster, and it has errors in ocg3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen-Psi Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 I hate clowns 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 Errors already stated.The pic creeps me out......2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coleio12 Posted March 11, 2010 Report Share Posted March 11, 2010 Ok lets say if you have a dark attributed deck? and most Monster slots are filled? sorry i don't know i'll give 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jreagles14 Posted March 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 Thank you for all the comments. I will take note of them and fix the errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 How can you summon this???? Remove then monster reborn it???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted March 12, 2010 Report Share Posted March 12, 2010 Totally agree with ragnarok... The OCG is horrible. Need more work on the OCG The pic is fine. The effect seems OP's 5.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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