I may have overdid it a bit..another card by Gluttony King Productions

[Gluttony King]

This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.Once per turn you can destroy and remove from play 1 monster on your oponents side of the field,your oponent draws 1 card.During the end phase of the turn this effect was activated Special Summon the removed from play monster to your side of the field and take damage equal to half of the Special Summoned monsters original ATK points and draw 1 card from your deck.During your standby phase remove this card from play.During the end phase of a turn this effect is activated Special Summon this monster to your side of the field and destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your oponent controls.During each of your end phases pay 2000 Life Points if you do not destroy this card.

 

 

fix ocg errors

[Deustodo]

"This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 monster your opponent controls, in addition, your opponent draws 1 card, during the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated, Special Summon the removed from play monster to your field and lose Life Points equal to half of the Special Summoned monster's original ATK, in addition, and draw 1 card. During your Standby Phase. remove this card from play, during the End Phase of the turn this effect is activated, Special Summon this card and destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field.During each of your End Phases, pay 2000 Life Pointsm if you do not destroy this card."

3/10 to you.

[........!]

slightly up'ed, and Deustodo already said the ocg errors, but i am nicer!

 

7/10

[nulk]

lil OP, art work looks nice

 

8/10

[speck]

7/10 8)