Мερhilεs Posted March 13, 2010 Report Share Posted March 13, 2010 [align=center]This is my very first card that I have made on this website, and it's Tsuna from KHR! Please comment and some constuctive criticism would be much appreciated. Lots of thanks to Espada Oscura, and DHeroDogma for helping me out with this! I'm really sorry, but the card lore wouldn't load onto the card properly (plus it was too small anyways...), so it was relocated to this spoiler.[spoiler= Card Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Dying Will Activator Pill", or "Rebuke Bullet". As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, if there is a monster on the opponent's side of the field that is in the same column as this card, this card gains 500 ATK. Once per turn, you can move this card to an adjacent unnocupied Monster Card Zone on your side of the field. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn this effect is activated.Credit to DHeroDogma for card grammar corrections. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
infernalemperor Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 not bad for your first card im working on hitman cards too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Error Fixes:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Dying Will Activator Pill", or "Rebuke Bullet". As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, If there is a monster on the opponent's side of the field that is in the same column as this card, this card loses 500 ATK. Once per turn, you can move this card to an adjacent unnocupied Monster Card Zone. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn this effect is activated. Now I leave it to others to fix the errors I've made on this correction Pretty Good, First time ever I've seen anyone used the Monster Card Zones8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 I see... alright, thanks, I will correct it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Espada Oscura Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Ah, you changed the picture. Epic. I think there's probably a card text limit now, which is why your cad wouldn't load. Happened to me too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Espada Oscura Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Ah, you changed the picture. Epic. I think there's probably a card text limit now, which is why your cad wouldn't load. Happened to me too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Do you know what the limit is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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