Remake fine here

[Gluttony King]

This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.Once per turn you can destroy and remove from play 1 monster on your oponents side of the field,your oponent draws 1 card.During the end phase of the turn this effect was activated Special Summon the removed from play monster to your side of the field and take damage equal to half of the Special Summoned monsters original ATK points and draw 1 card from your deck.During your standby phase remove this card from play.During the end phase of a turn this effect is activated Special Summon this monster to your side of the field and destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your oponent controls.During each of your end phases pay 2000 Life Points if you do not destroy this card.

[Teh ZWOOTS]

Not bad... Please, for the sake of my sanity, TWO SPACES AFTER EVERY PERIOD! DX

 

7/10

[Gluttony King]

Not bad... Please' date=' for the sake of my sanity, TWO SPACES AFTER EVERY PERIOD! DX

 

7/10

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idc bout sanity two spaces after every period is stupid and idc ill take 1 1/10 for not doing that than to take a 10/10 for doing it

[Horu]

you could always just space after the period. and readable cards are very nice. they look pro.

[speck]

Didn't I read the same effect on another one of your cards? 6/10 8)

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(Ugly Fiend Creature) has exactly the same effect as this card... another one of your threads and a different card.

 

(Cycle Death Kid)

This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.Once per turn you can destroy and remove from play 1 monster on your oponents side of the field,your oponent draws 1 card.During the end phase of the turn this effect was activated Special Summon the removed from play monster to your side of the field and take damage equal to half of the Special Summoned monsters original ATK points and draw 1 card from your deck.During your standby phase remove this card from play.During the end phase of a turn this effect is activated Special Summon this monster to your side of the field and destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your oponent controls.During each of your end phases pay 2000 Life Points if you do not destroy this card.

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-192968.html

 

Try making different effects for each card.