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This card cannot be Special Summoned. You must Tribute 3 Warrior-type FIRE monsters to Normal Summon this card (You cannot Set this card). Once per turn, you can destroy all monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the total ATK of the destroyed monster(s). If you do, you cannot declare an attack this turn. When this card battles with a monster, you may activate 1 Trap Card from your Graveyard. If you do so, that Trap Card is removed from play.

 

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Idk what your talking about. Please leave or I will neg you. Thank you. I'll keep your 7/10 as a copliment from a lower level mem.

 

WTF??? Are you the king or something like that?

First: If you don't want to have negative critique stop posting cards!

Second: Only because you made more posts doesn't mean you are a better member! I searched for spikeball's cards and I think they are better then yours!

 

I give a 6/10 for your card and a 1/10 for your social behaviour!

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Idk what your talking about. Please leave or I will neg you. Thank you. I'll keep your 7/10 as a copliment from a lower level mem.

 

WTF??? Are you the king or something like that?

First: If you don't want to have negative critique stop posting cards!

Second: Only because you made more posts doesn't mean you are a better member! I searched for spikeball's cards and I think they are better then yours!

 

I give a 6/10 for your card and a 1/10 for your social behaviour!

 

Damn Straight.

 

Bad card. Effect is too OP'd. -5.93/10

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This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Advance Summoned except by releasing 3 Warrior-Type FIRE monsters to Normal Summon this card (You cannot Set this card). Once per turn, you can destroy all monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the highest destroyed monster. If you do, you cannot declare an attack this turn. When this card battles with a monster, you can remove from play 1 Trap Card from your graveyard to activate its effect.

 

LittleBoom is right, you really shouldn't talk down to people just because they're at a lower level than you. I've seen some pretty pitiful cards from other level 5 and up users and some pretty amazing ones from newbies. I'm not exactly perfect either, but I wouldn't go as far as threatening people just because of their lower level.

Anyway, I've altered the effect and well I can't say it's totally balanced but I wouldn't call it too OP'ed either. It's not exactly unique but I like the idea though it might just be my computer but I can't see your card's image.

 

Overall Rank: B

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This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Advance Summoned except by releasing 3 Warrior-Type FIRE monsters to Normal Summon this card (You cannot Set this card). Once per turn' date=' you can destroy all monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the highest destroyed monster. If you do, you cannot declare an attack this turn. When this card battles with a monster, you [b']can remove from play 1 Trap Card from your graveyard to activate its effect.[/b]

 

LittleBoom is right, you really shouldn't talk down to people just because they're at a lower level than you. I've seen some pretty pitiful cards from other level 5 and up users and some pretty amazing ones from newbies. I'm not exactly perfect either, but I wouldn't go as far as threatening people just because of their lower level.

Anyway, I've altered the effect and well I can't say it's totally balanced but I wouldn't call it too OP'ed either. It's not exactly unique but I like the idea though it might just be my computer but I can't see your card's image.

 

Overall Rank: B

 

Dark Force's OCG is correct...

 

Thought, with the changes you made the cards is more balanced.

But the cards as it is Right now is OPed... practically you can inflict more than 5000 in just 1 turn =/ and the effect of the Trap Card needs another Drawback cuz it say when it battles... so if your opponent attacks this card then you can activate a Trap Card... for free =/ I think that 700 LP for activate this effect would be fair...

 

The card as it is right now is OPed... and don't be so harsh with low stars member cuz the stars doesn't mean anything ;D

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This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Advance Summoned except by releasing 3 Warrior-Type FIRE monsters to Normal Summon this card (You cannot Set this card). Once per turn' date=' you can destroy all monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the highest destroyed monster. If you do, you cannot declare an attack this turn. When this card battles with a monster, you [b']can remove from play 1 Trap Card from your graveyard to activate its effect.[/b]

 

LittleBoom is right, you really shouldn't talk down to people just because they're at a lower level than you. I've seen some pretty pitiful cards from other level 5 and up users and some pretty amazing ones from newbies. I'm not exactly perfect either, but I wouldn't go as far as threatening people just because of their lower level.

Anyway, I've altered the effect and well I can't say it's totally balanced but I wouldn't call it too OP'ed either. It's not exactly unique but I like the idea though it might just be my computer but I can't see your card's image.

 

Overall Rank: B

 

OCG still off. What the hell is Advance Summon?

 

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Normal Summoned except by tributing 3 Warrior-Type FIRE monsters. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all face-up monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the ATK of the highest destroyed monster. If you do this, you cannot declare an attack this turn.

 

Fixed OCG and effect. I still say this card sucks.

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This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Advance Summoned except by releasing 3 Warrior-Type FIRE monsters to Normal Summon this card (You cannot Set this card). Once per turn' date=' you can destroy all monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the highest destroyed monster. If you do, you cannot declare an attack this turn. When this card battles with a monster, you [b']can remove from play 1 Trap Card from your graveyard to activate its effect.[/b]

 

LittleBoom is right, you really shouldn't talk down to people just because they're at a lower level than you. I've seen some pretty pitiful cards from other level 5 and up users and some pretty amazing ones from newbies. I'm not exactly perfect either, but I wouldn't go as far as threatening people just because of their lower level.

Anyway, I've altered the effect and well I can't say it's totally balanced but I wouldn't call it too OP'ed either. It's not exactly unique but I like the idea though it might just be my computer but I can't see your card's image.

 

Overall Rank: B

 

OCG still off. What the hell is Advance Summon?

 

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This monster cannot be Normal Summoned except by tributing 3 Warrior-Type FIRE monsters. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all face-up monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the ATK of the highest destroyed monster. If you do this, you cannot declare an attack this turn.

 

Fixed OCG and effect. I still say this card sucks.

DarkForce's OCG is correct =/ Yours too...

 

but you're making the card more balanced =/ thought it will be better if it only does half damage of the combined ATK and taking out the Trap Effect...

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Warrior-type should be Warrior-Type

 

"Once per turn, you can destroy all monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the total ATK of the destroyed monster(s)" <----this burn might be a bit too much

 

I'd change it to 200* the combined levels of all the monsters you destroyed

 

8.4/10

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