Jolta Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 [align=center] All hail the Umbrella Man! And yes, I am starting to make Spirit Monsters. [spoiler=[color=#FF0000]Karakase[/color]]This card cannot be Special Summoned. Return it to the hand during the End Phase of the turn this card was Summoned.When this card battles a face-down card, destroy it without inflicting Battle Damage. [spoiler=[color=#32CD32]Kasa-obake[/color]]This card cannot be Special Summoned. It can only be Normal Summoned or Set. Return it to the hand during the End Phase this card was Summoned. When this card is destroyed by battle, you gain Life Points instead of losing Life Points. [spoiler=[b]Now is the chance to look under her skirt, even if it means killing yourself...[/b]]Once per turn, while this card is face-up on the field, you may activate the following Effects:-Tribute 1 EARTH Spirit Monster. Destroy 3 cards on your opponent's side of the field.-Tribute 1 WATER Spirit Monster. Increase your Life Points by the Level of the Tributed monster x600-Tribute 1 FIRE Spirit Monster. Reduce your opponent's Life Points by the Level of the Tributed monster x600.-Tribute 1 WIND Spirit monster. Take control of 1 face-up card on your opponent's side of the field until this card is removed from the field.-Tribute 1 LIGHT Spirit Monster. Both players must reveal their hands.-Tribute 1 DARK Spirit Monster. Both players draw 3 cards. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-193224.html ^That's the girl in the Art.^ Soon I'll create more Yokai! And don't say that Karakasa and Kasa-obake are the same thing. I know.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 "It can only be Normal Summoned or Set." this is unnecessary... (on your second monster) Simple effects so nothing to said.... and about the Spell: "while this card is face-up on the field" is unnecessary too... and change may to can.. The effect for the EARTH Spirit is OPed, change to destroy just 1 card instead... For the Burn effect for the FIRE Spirit change it to 500 or 400 to balance it... The effect for the DARK Spirit is also OPed, change to Draw 2 cards instead of 3... 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted March 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 Thanks... Well the Spell does seem Oped... it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmallieBigs Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 [align=center] All hail the Umbrella Man! And yes' date=' I [i']am[/i] starting to make Spirit Monsters. [spoiler=[color=#FF0000]Karakase[/color]]This card cannot be Special Summoned. Return it to the hand during the End Phase of the turn this card was Summoned. Normal Summoned or flipped face-up is better When this card battles a face-down card, destroy it without inflicting Battle Damage. I think the proper OCG is before damage calculation. [spoiler=[color=#32CD32]Kasa-obake[/color]]This card cannot be Special Summoned. It can only be Normal Summoned or Set. Return it to the hand during the End Phase this card was Summoned. It would be better if it said Normal Summoned or flipped face-up When this card is destroyed by battle, you gain Life Points instead of losing Life Points. This doesn't seem too bad [spoiler=[b]Now is the chance to look under her skirt, even if it means killing yourself...[/b]]Once per turn, while this card is face-up on the field, you may activate the following Effects:-Tribute 1 EARTH Spirit Monster. Destroy 3 cards on your opponent's side of the field. Broken just broken it can set up way too many OTKs-Tribute 1 WATER Spirit Monster. Increase your Life Points by the Level of the Tributed monster x600 Fine just fine-Tribute 1 FIRE Spirit Monster. Reduce your opponent's Life Points by the Level of the Tributed monster x600. Fine a little burn damage couldn't harm anybody-Tribute 1 WIND Spirit monster. Take control of 1 face-up card on your opponent's side of the field until this card is removed from the field. This seems slightly broken-Tribute 1 LIGHT Spirit Monster. Both players must reveal their hands. This is fine.-Tribute 1 DARK Spirit Monster. Both players draw 3 cards. Broken it gives Tragoedia +1200/1800 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-193224.html ^That's the girl in the Art.^ Soon I'll create more Yokai! And don't say that Karakasa and Kasa-obake are the same thing. I know.[/align]I'll give this an 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 They are really good cards and i like the pics.Made on paint? They must be 9/10 like the effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted March 14, 2010 Report Share Posted March 14, 2010 The first one is a little underpowered. Also... they both vaguely look like bananas. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 both effects are too boring first card I find the effect too UPed, give that one another effect for it 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted March 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Thanks all... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightGuardian1764 Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 They both have bland effects, The First One, just destroy the monster The Second One, effect does not clear that you gain Life Points until the End Phase or Permanently. (If that is permanently, your opponent cannot wins the duel) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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