Zarkon, Lightsworn King

[Parion555]

Sorry if the picture is overused i just couldn't fin a better picture for a Lightsworn King.Here it is:

 

 

Lore:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 "Lightsworn" monsters and 1 "Judgment Dragon" in your Graveyard.When this card is Summoned,select 1 "Lightsworn" Monster in your Graveyard.This card gains the removed from play Monster's effect,until the End Phase.When this card is selected as an attack target ,you can pay 3000 Life Points to Tribute this card and End the Battle Phase.Then,add 1 "Judgment Dragon" that is in your removed from play pile.

 

Sorry about the removed from play pile part,i don't know how it's really called.

[DarkForce™]

NO border on the image like normal lightsworn. The "King" is Judgement Dragon. Minor OCG errors, bad pic. 5/10

[Parion555]

Wait,i always thought that Judgment was just the Dragon and they were maybe making an even bigger Lightsworn Monster that would eventually get banned or something.And where are the support cards for Judgment and Lightsworns?Especially after the March Banlist?

[FSBolthof]

I like the idea, still a bit too easy to summon, cause they can be pretty fast in your Graveyard. Never mention removed from play pile, just say removed from play "Judgement Dragon". Minor OCG errors.

I don't mind the pic is overused, I like to keep watching at that beatifull art.

I'm in a good mood. (and I love Lightsworn)

8/10

[JadenxAtemYAOI]

Holy fu** that's good. Try adjusting his attack and defense. That's all I can say. 9.5/10

[Parion555]

Thanks everybody but seriously do you think that Lightsworn support cards will come out in the next couple of sets?

[DarkForce™]

No to both your posts Parrion. Do not have an attitude with me. I will however bump my rating up to 6/10 because of SOME points made here.

[ragnarok1945]

"Then,add 1 "Judgment Dragon" that is in your removed from play pile." <---you need to say add Judgment Dragon TO YOUR HAND

 

and even though JD is very OPed, 3000 LP just isn't worth it.

 

I'd make it 1500, 2000 at the most for LP pay

 

6/10

[byak]

Lightsworns are dead and should stay dead. :L

[Parion555]

DarkForce i don't have any attitude with you i was just hoping Lightsworn support cards were coming out,i mean because of the March1 Banlist i had ti mix Lightsworns with Destiny heroes.I mean i was playing Lightsworns for 1 and a half year.

[Hyenn]

As mentioned above the last sentence should be changed to: If you do, then add 1 removed from play "Judgement Dragon" to your hand.

Also I agree 3000 LP might be bit too much, 2000 LP sounds better.

And 2 "LIghtsworn" + 1 "Judgement Dragon" sounds way too easy exspecially for a card with 3200 ATK and a decent ability, I would make it maybe 4 "Lightsworns" instead.

Also pic doesn't fit the Lightsworn theme at all, even less to mention the graphic style is totally different but I guess it can't be helped.

Also I think there is some problem here:

When this card is Summoned, select 1 "Lightsworn" Monster in your Graveyard.This card gains the removed from play Monster's effect,until the End Phase.

To translate this to an actual situation: You have Jenis, Jain, Gargoth and Judgement Dragon (JD) in your grave.

You special summon this card by removing Jenis and Gargoth + JD from play. Then you select Jain, and this card gains the effect of Jenis, Gargoth and JD. Nothing happens with the selected card: Jain.

Now if you wanted to make it so it gains Jain's effect, who was selected then this is what you should of have written:

When this card is Special Summoned, select 1 "Lightsworn" in your graveyard, this card gains the effect of that card until the End Phase.

Or if you want the selected card to be removed aswell, as your second sentences implies, then: When this card is Specail Summoned, remove from play a "Lightsworn" in your graveyard, to make this card gain it's effect until the End Phase.

[G-Break]

fix the last sentence.

"Then,add 1 "Judgment Dragon" that is in your removed from play pile."

 

well nice card, i thought when i make a custom card i won't use it with official tcg card.

 

overall 7/10 :]

[Parion555]

Sorry i'll try to fix that a little later.

[Hyenn]

"removed from play pile" is not a good idea, Yugioh cards usually say "removed from play "Judgement Dragon"" instead.

[NightGuardian1764]

All "Lightsworn" monsters have an effect to send topcards of your Deck to the Graveyard during each End Phase. You can add this card to your card effect.

[Jazin Kay]

fix the last sentence.

"Then' date='add 1 "Judgment Dragon" that is in your removed from play [b']pile[/b]."

 

well nice card, i thought when i make a custom card i won't use it with official tcg card.

 

overall 7/10 :]

 

Bad OCG fix. "Pile" exists in the text of NO actual card.

 

"That is removed from play" is correct.

[Lomanikoro]

lol i absoulutely HATE lightsworns. i hope ur king of LS dies tooooooo. nah nice card though :)

[Parion555]

Hey if you hate Lightsworns so much then why aren't you happy they got screwed and because all the Lightsworn players have to change decks including me?I mean i have to play destinysworn for god's sake!

[Tormented]

This is capiable of 1 turn kill wtf... slap this with some Equip cards and use some kind of Field spell.... and still the effect part dosen't part up to it really and I would never pay 3000 lp just to end a battle phase...

 

6/10 try n work on it...

[Parion555]

The hole point of the 3000 LP efect is not just to end the battle phase it's to add Judgment to your hand.