Cyber Altair Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Well you all by now know my DDM( Dark Dice Monster) style, thats roll a dice and then chosse the appropriate effect. anyways this is going to by my last card of this style, my unique style:cry::cry::cry::cry:. so enjoy this and if you guys want me to continue this style say so and if hopfully many like the style i might continue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 I like the ideas behind it, and heres a tip ^_^ use an online language translator and convert some names into german, it gives them sometimes, a more powerful name ^_^ like my Des Vulkendrache, its sounds better then its english translation, the volcano dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 cool thanks i'll try it for my next card. so how is this card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 There are a few grammar errors and such, but its good otherwise ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 It should be:During your Battle Phase, roll a dice and apply the appropriate effect depending on the number rolled on the dice:- Even number: Increase this card's ATK by 20 during damage calculation only.- Odd number: Pay 300 Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 It should be:During your Battle Phase' date=' roll a dice and apply the appropriate effect depending on the number rolled on the dice:- Even number: Increase this card's ATK by 20[b']0[/b] during damage calculation only.- Odd number: Pay 300 Life Points. ^^^i bloded the errors xD!^^^ nyways other than that 9/10!Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 ya i guess so but if you check my other cards they are like this and there isn't really a rule in the OCG about this since there aren't really that many monsters that need dice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 An alternative version:During your Battle Phase, roll a dice. If it is an even number, increase this card's ATK by 200 during damage calculation only. If it is an odd number, pay 300 Life Points./take 300 damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 thanks but i like the version above, looks more powerful lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Good pic and effect, grammar problems. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 yup gramar is my problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 hmmm ok, Battle Phase and Life Points dont need the - between them, and its die not dice, dice implice more then one, die implies one, 9/10 =) make more! 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 8/10 Nice idea but the OCG sucks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 i have like 20 cards of this type. This set is called DDM and it's mostly about Fiend DARK monsters but with a varity of other cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 really kool i like the pic 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
II DEFiiNED II Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 8/10 Nice idea but the OCG sucks What he said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flame Dragon Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 i know, it's a pain to get the OCG really good on cards that don't really have any guide lines from other cards, but still........ The card is cool overall. if you use gyrus effect, 9/10. O cap the D in dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 ya so it was hard making my set and so thier OCG was unique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rpenergy Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 interesting card. i'll agree that the grammar should be changed and stuff like that along with the text, but you said thats how you worded it with your set so 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 The grammar needs improvement, but other than that, its excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 thanks both of you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MechManiac Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Yeah it's ok 8/10 since the most you'll get is a 2500 ATK one tribute monster but what is Battle Calculation? I think you meant Damage Calculation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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