End World Deity

[Plaguespreader Zombie]

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End World Deity

DARK

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Angel / Effect

When this card is discard from the hand, Special Summon this card in face-up DEF position, and halve this card's ATK. Once per turn, if this card is in face-up ATK position, you can select 1 monster your Opponent controls. Tribute 1 DARK monster, excluding "End World Deity", and destroy the select monster. This card gains ATK equal to the Tributed monster until the End Phase of your next turn. If this card's ATK is equal to 2800 or higher, destroy this card.

2700 / 2200

 

Image Credit: Father Wolf

 

I tried to make a balanced DAD.

 

Original Name was "Omnicidal God", but I decided to make it more like a card Konami would actually make.[/align]

[T3RA PROWL3R]

Angel isn't a Type. Try Fairy or Fiend instead.

Opponent should be opponent

,excluding "End World Deity", should be (excluding this card)

This card gains ATK equal to the Tributed monster? That doesn't make sense.

So this card relies solely on being discarded to be useful?

[Squirrel Girl]

ATK position should be Attack Position. DEF position should be Defense Position. Good card overall 8/10

[Elementalist111]

When this card is discarded from your hand, Special Summon this card in face-up DEF position, and halve this card's ATK. Once per turn, if this card is in face-up ATK position, you can select 1 monster your opponent controls. By Tributing 1 DARK monster, excluding "End World Deity", destroy the selected monster. This card gains ATK equal to the Tributed monster until the End Phase of your next turn. If this card's ATK is equal to 2800 or higher, destroy this card.

 

Other than a few minor OCG errors, the effect is good. I personally dont like the pic, but the card is pretty good 8/10

[Plaguespreader Zombie]

Angel isn't a Type. Try Fairy or Fiend instead.

Opponent should be opponent

' date='excluding "End World Deity", should be (excluding this card)

This card gains ATK equal to the Tributed monster? That doesn't make sense.

So this card relies solely on being discarded to be useful?

[/quote']

 

Angel is Fairy-Type.

Excluding "End World Deity" prevents it from tributing another copy of itself.

By "Equal to the Tributed Monster" it means equal to the Tributed Monster's ATK.

You can Normal Summon it as well, you can Special Summon it through other means. It's hardly worthless without discarding it.

 

 

 

When this card is discarded from your hand' date=' Special Summon this card in face-up DEF position, and halve this card's ATK. Once per turn, if this card is in face-up ATK position, you can select 1 monster your [b']opponent[/b] controls. By Tributing 1 DARK monster, excluding "End World Deity", destroy the selected monster. This card gains ATK equal to the Tributed monster until the End Phase of your next turn. If this card's ATK is equal to 2800 or higher, destroy this card.

 

Other than a few minor OCG errors, the effect is good. I personally dont like the pic, but the card is pretty good 8/10

 

Thanks, it's been awhile since I made a card.

[Squirrel Girl]

When this card is discarded from your hand' date=' Special Summon this card in face-up [b']Defense[/b] position, and halve this card's ATK. Once per turn, if this card is in face-up Attack position, you can select 1 monster your opponent controls. By Tributing 1 DARK monster, excluding "End World Deity", destroy the selected monster. This card gains ATK equal to the Tributed monster until the End Phase of your next turn. If this card's ATK is equal to 2800 or higher, destroy this card.

 

Other than a few minor OCG errors, the effect is good. I personally dont like the pic, but the card is pretty good 8/10

 

You forget 2 things that I have changed. But this is still good 8/10

[T3RA PROWL3R]

Angel isn't a Type. Try Fairy or Fiend instead.

Opponent should be opponent

' date='excluding "End World Deity", should be (excluding this card)

This card gains ATK equal to the Tributed monster? That doesn't make sense.

So this card relies solely on being discarded to be useful?

[/quote']

 

Angel is Fairy-Type.

Excluding "End World Deity" prevents it from tributing another copy of itself.

By "Equal to the Tributed Monster" it means equal to the Tributed Monster's ATK.

You can Normal Summon it as well, you can Special Summon it through other means. It's hardly worthless.

 

Well then, change it to Fairy.

Why would somebody want to tribute a 2700 ATK monster?

Then change the effect on the card.

I mean its effect is worthless if it isn't discarded

[wero-vasto]

Fix:

 

When this card is discarded from the hand, Special Summon it in face-up Defense Position. If this card is Summoned this way, halve it's ATK. Once per turn, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can select 1 monster your opponent controls. Tribute 1 DARK monster, other than "End World Deity", and destroy the selected monster. Increase this card ATK equal to the Tributed monster until the End Phase of your next turn. If this card ATK is equal to 2800 or higher, destroy it.

 

 

I sujest to add to change the last effect to this: "If this card's ATK is equal to 2800 or higher by it's own effect, destroy it."

 

If not, it's pretty UPed in the last part =/

 

Love the Pic :3

 

If you want to make a Balanced DAD it's impossible D: DAD was made to be broken <.<

[Plaguespreader Zombie]

Angel isn't a Type. Try Fairy or Fiend instead.

Opponent should be opponent

' date='excluding "End World Deity", should be (excluding this card)

This card gains ATK equal to the Tributed monster? That doesn't make sense.

So this card relies solely on being discarded to be useful?

[/quote']

 

Angel is Fairy-Type.

Excluding "End World Deity" prevents it from tributing another copy of itself.

By "Equal to the Tributed Monster" it means equal to the Tributed Monster's ATK.

You can Normal Summon it as well, you can Special Summon it through other means. It's hardly worthless.

 

Well then, change it to Fairy.

Why would somebody want to tribute a 2700 ATK monster?

Then change the effect on the card.

I mean its effect is worthless if it isn't discarded

 

ITT: ATK is everything in a monster.

 

You're bad at this game, good day sir.

 

Also, I don't think you understand. Angel is Fairy, just the Japanese Equivalent.

 

Fix:

 

When this card is discarded from the hand' date=' Special Summon it in face-up Defense Position. If this card is Summoned this way, halve it's ATK. Once per turn, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can select 1 monster your opponent controls. Tribute 1 DARK monster, other than "End World Deity", and destroy the selected monster. Increase this card ATK equal to the Tributed monster until the End Phase of your next turn. If this card ATK is equal to 2800 or higher, destroy it.

 

 

I sujest to add to change the last effect to this: "If this card's ATK is equal to 2800 or higher by it's own effect, destroy it."

 

If not, it's pretty UPed in the last part =/

 

Love the Pic :3

 

If you want to make a Balanced DAD it's impossible D: DAD was made to be broken <.<

[/quote']

 

A girl can dream D:

[wero-vasto]

Fix:

 

When this card is discarded from the hand' date=' Special Summon it in face-up Defense Position. If this card is Summoned this way, halve it's ATK. Once per turn, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can select 1 monster your opponent controls. Tribute 1 DARK monster, other than "End World Deity", and destroy the selected monster. Increase this card ATK equal to the Tributed monster until the End Phase of your next turn. If this card ATK is equal to 2800 or higher, destroy it.

 

 

I sujest to add to change the last effect to this: "If this card's ATK is equal to 2800 or higher by it's own effect, destroy it."

 

If not, it's pretty UPed in the last part =/

 

Love the Pic :3

 

If you want to make a Balanced DAD it's impossible D: DAD was made to be broken <.<

[/quote']

 

A girl can dream D:

 

Awww.... you beat me with that :3 <3

[StevenBray]

OCG: "Once per turn, if this card is in face-up ATK position, you can select 1 monster your Opponent controls. Tribute 1 DARK monster, excluding "End World Deity", and destroy the select monster."

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I think it should be: "Once per turn when this card is in Attack Position, you can Tribute 1 face-up DARK monster on your field, except this card, to destroy 1 monster on your opponent's field".

 

Rating: 7/10 - Everything I would say has already been said and I would change the part I said. Other than that, that's pretty much it.

[ragnarok1945]

angel isn't a real type, change it to Fairy

 

OCG correction is already up, and I see little reason to boost this card's atk at all given its destruction effect at 2800

 

7.8/10

[Plaguespreader Zombie]

angel isn't a real type' date=' change it to Fairy

 

OCG correction is already up, and I see little reason to boost this card's atk at all given its destruction effect at 2800

 

7.8/10

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Angel is a real freakin' type. It's the correct Japanese Translation for the Fairy-Type, and I will always use it when I make Fairy Monsters, so get used to it, k?

[-SupernovA-]

He looks like the guy from Full Metal Alchemist. ;p

 

I totally love the way you post your info, I think I shall copy you from now on.

 

EDIT: Since the card is already fixed I didn't have much to comment on, except that I like it.