Home Slice Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Lore:This card cannot be Special Summoned.Once per turn select 1 of your opponents monsters.Increase this cards ATK 100x for each level the selected card has.The selected card cannot attack for the rest of the duel.On the third Draw Phase Remove the selected card from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 cool effect!!!!real good pic..I can't see OCG...9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Any ways to improve... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Any ways to improve... you 're always improving!!!!:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Thanks I guess...any more comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
najnaj Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 9/10 but check for any missing commasand write a lore, stating the effect, under the card.also: "This card cannot attack for the rest of the duel."use remainder or duration of the duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Duration is defently not it...-_- I think your trying to correct better OCG than yoursOh and I already did add a lore under the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speck Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 not bad 7/10 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 That really a bad rate from you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monst~er Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Really cool card and I like the effect and the PIC is awsom :)But I think its a bit underpower..I think its a 9.9999/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Your saying a card that can get up to a 1200 ATK boost and remove any monster from play is uped...oh well thanks for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monst~er Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Your saying a card that can get up to a 1200 ATK boost and remove any monster from play is uped...oh well thanks for the comment Yeah but its DEF is realy low and its a 4 star card...but I guess your right :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 I prefer making 4 stars...but your right the DEF is low...but I wouldn't see why you would use it in DEF mode Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tsukiko Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 good card sweet effect 10/10 nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Thanks new member dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speck Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 That really a bad rate from you... Only because it needs a little OCG, and I was tired. I read it a little closer this time.... It still needs some OCG however, I'll give it a 8/10 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 what the mistake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monst~er Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 I prefer making 4 stars...but your right the DEF is low...but I wouldn't see why you would use it in DEF mode Well in that case I guess I'll raise my rate to 10/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Bump need comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speck Posted March 21, 2010 Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 what the mistake Need a space a the beginning of each sentence, 100x should be 100 points. Also you might want to say: Once per turn (you can) select 1... otherwise according to the card text you have no choice other than to activate the effect every turn. Just a thought. The rest of the wording is just really choice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Well your right about the once per turn thing but the first one I'm not so sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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