Cthonian Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 I'd be happy to be the one who made him a Zodiac member X] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted April 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 Accepted Sanderman,well Cthonian if Sanderman is ok with that then you can be the one. I might plan some of the fan fic flashback to show the Zodiac Members past's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sanderman Posted April 1, 2010 Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 Accepted Sanderman' date='well Cthonian if Sanderman is ok with that then you can be the one. I might plan some of the fan fic flashback to show the Zodiac Members past's.[/quote'] Ofcourse kan Chtonian do it( he seems awesome!)!! Im so exited you like my character!! XDCan we also make some cards for our characters?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 this is the first time in over 24 hours I've been able to get on... something must have happened cuz it always took me to the page we are sorry, we could not find yugiohcardmaker.net Yay, I get to be Sanderman's recruiter XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sanderman Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 this is the first time in over 24 hours I've been able to get on... something must have happened cuz it always took me to the page we are sorry' date=' we could not find yugiohcardmaker.net Yay, I get to be Sanderman's recruiter XD[/quote'] What an honor for you XD!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 I know right.... anyways until this thing starts going further I'm starting my own but with the Chinese Zodiac. Feel free to check it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted April 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 Im back people I had problems on the internet,well here chapter 2. [spoiler=chapter 2 the Strike Of The Monsoon Part 1]30th December 2099 The Spiral Serpent duelist became an Apprentice Duelist named Baron and the teacher who was at the exam was called Jin.Last night after my sucess I had an black dream of darkness as a little light shined brighter than ever.Oh and I became an Apprentice duelist. ______________________________Jin's Classroom_____________________________________ "Welcome everyone,your back to England Academy,"Greeted Jin opening the door as 30 apprentice duelists entered the the mediam sized classroom.Inside was old desks with new chairs. "Wow,"I said noticing a big screem. "Like it,onto work."Jin said contiuning into explaination."There is 120 Apprentice duelists that ill be teaching and you are a quater of them of chorse." "That explains everything about the ranks,"Baron knew. "Ok firstly, your dueling records have been reset"Jin contiuned."Therefore, your wins and loses recorded goes back to 0 also since this is a quick lesson in explaination ill be teaching dueling stratagy and history." As they paused a bell rang saying for students to check their rooms in the Apprentice Duelist section. ___________________Outside_______________________________ 2 Zodiac Members walked through a path as heavy rain struck them. "Well, chosen to get the 2 stones,Gemini and Cancer."One of the Zodiac members said staring at his stone Scorpio. "When the encounter an person when we duel them then the Zodiac shall send the loser to the Zodiac Dungeons,"The other Member remembered holding out his Zodiac stone Taurus as it glowed in the light of the sun and made massive rain appear. "We must test the one who has a stone by getting someone to duel him,"the Scorpio Member explained as he witnessed an explosion happen as they hide behind the hedge as they saw the person who shall be their pawn. __________________________________Rex's Room________________________________ The door was ancient it had cracks and holes in it.Almost falling apart as the bed had 2 feet left as the desk next to the bed had tons of books with torn pages. "If thats bad, I could imagine the Dropouts Dorm."I said as I glanced out the window as I saw a house collapsing."I thought this Academy was new." "It is,"said a voice. "WHAT!?"I reacted turning my head round fast and jerky as an great shine of light appeared. "I am your stone,Cancer"the voice Anounced. "The stone is real?"I questioned to Cancer. "Yes that guy Vilan could of been sent to the Zodiac Dungeon to lose hi Soul for all enternaty if he didn't throw me at you,"Cancer explained."Anyway go to the duel arena inside one of the doors behind is an huge arena that acts images making it look like another world." ___________________________Arena Dorm______________________________ "What is this place?"I wondered staring around in this empty room.The only thing there was buttons. "Ha ha ha"laughed a voice of an dark Vilain. "Hes you Opponant,"Cancer said shooting an glimmer of light in the darkness. "You see me now,"said Baron walking through as darkness arised around his army.He trotted to a switch and slamed it."Time to duel." "Whats going on?"I questioned gasing apon the room as the scenary changed into a rainforest."anyway lets start." "Ok first I summon Alantean Pikeman in Atk Mode(1400/0),"Baron started."Next I set a face down." "Ok Now I summon Brave Warrior in Atk Mode(1600/1000)."I commanded."Brave Warrior gains a counter so I remove it to increase his Atk by 500(2100/1000).Brave Warrior attack(Baron 3300 life points)." "Not so fast I activate call of the haunted,"Baron exclaimed as alantean pikeman appeared."Time for my Serpent to Rise." Behind a tree was a Zodiac Member,watching the duel as he grinned. "Haaa,"He sly laughed quietly."The test is going to be short,"He said to himself picturing Spiral Serpent in his head as darkness arised surrounding it.He held Taurus up into the sky as the sky turned red. "NOW IT'S MY TURN!"Baron Exclaimed in Anger."TIME FOR MY SERPENT TO RISE!!!" TO BE CONTIUNED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Glad to see you didn't forget about this... this is one of my favorites that I'm reading. Good chapter and can't wait to read more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted April 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Realy is it one of your favourites, I knew I was doing slightly better but I didn't imagine a lot.Well ive edited chapter 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kip~ Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 as always, NICE! :D can't wait for Peter to go into a duel. You know where to find my angels, in my siggeh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 nice chapter...:Dfinally my character appeared..:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted April 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Thanks, chapter 3 will be on Sunday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kip~ Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Man, I'll be at my brother's Sunday. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted April 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Oh ok,have fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted April 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 Heres Chapter 3. [spoiler=chapter 3 Strike Of The Monsoon Part 2] [spoiler=Field Overview]Rex has 4000 Life Points.-Brave Warrior(2100/1000) Baron has 3300 Life points-Alantean Pikeman(1400/0) "My Turn!"Baron shouted as he drew rain swiped on the ground like an atomic bomb."First I activate star blaster paying 1000 life points to lower all lv in my hand by 2,next I tribute my Alantean Pikeman to summon Spiral Serpent in Atk Position(Atk 2900/Def 2900)"Baron explained as life points dropped to 2300,as his mighty beast landed on the ground an heavly roared."Next I equip axe of despair to my Spiral Serpent(3900/2900),Now Spiral Serpent destroy that pathetic warrior that calls himself brave.(Rex 2200 Life Points)."Baron commanded as the Serpent grew larger then turned dark as it shot a massive wave at Brave Warrior. "Urghhhh!"I said."What a shadow duel." "Yes,"Baron said turning into a laugh."It's known as a Zodiac Duel you know when 2 stones face off in the ultimate showdown." "Yes but, your Opponant is controled,"Cancer explained shining."You must win this or the Zodiac Organisation will gain another stone," "The Zodiac Organisation ?"I repeated into a question. "Yes they were normal people who somehow became a Vilian"Cancer signed going into a longer explaination."The vilian before failing their goal is chosen by a Dark Zodiac Stone,that Stone guides them into The Organisation." "What about their goals?"I curiously wondered. "The Organisation has power over everything,their goals have a higher chance of sucess.However, you may know the minor goals but the Zodiac's have an advanced goal what it is even a mystery to us."Cancer replied."Remember the duel." "Oh yeah"I remembered turning to Baron."My turn I activate warrior scrap paying 500 life points(Rex 1700 life points) to Special Summon Brave Warrior in Def Mode(lv 4).Next I summon Baby Medor Dragon(lv 2) by the way my dragon is treated as a lv 4." "What!"Baron shouted in a dark voice."A lv 8 synchro cannot defeat my monster." "Fine then I synchro summon Medor Dragon In Atk Mode(2000/3000)!"I commanded as Medor Dragon rised high up."Next your serpent gets a medor counter then I activate medor crush destroying it,now I equip my dragon with synchro boost(2500/3000)."I explained as I looked at Spiral Serpent destroyed in the light."Now Medor Dragon ATTACK!!!" "Nooo!"Baron pained falling on the ground. (Baron 0 Life Points) "Haaa"laughed a voice. "Come out!"I shouted. "The Baron guy may have be quite interesting to control but,Im impressed"The Zodiac Member holding Taurus moved out the shadows and vanished."HAAAA!!! The next time we meet, we shall duel each other." "What happened."Baron said as he got up, he saw a slight glimpe of the face of the Zodiac Member before he dissappeared. "You were controled by Zodiac"I answered. "All I remember was 2 shady characters grabbing me and sending me to a world of darkness."Baron said."Then a small shine of light appeared in the cloud of darkness and rescued my back here." "Lets get out here."I said."Im sick of the heavy raining in this rainforest." ___________________________Jin's Office_______________________________ "Ok so you say you were dueling each other?"Jin said. "Yep and an Zodiac Member holding Taurus was controling Baron"I remembered. "The other member had a stone known as Scorpio"Baron said. "Amazing ill alert the Chancellor"Jin said."Is that all." "Yep"I quickly said. "Perhaps the greatest threat ever to come across Europe is here"Jin frowned."Oh yeah another thing Rex 2 duelists want to meet you on new years." END OF CHAPTER Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted April 11, 2010 Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 nice..:DI'm so evil..sexy..:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted April 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 Ok everyone will have their time,chapter 4 will be on 17th. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted April 12, 2010 Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 why so long for the next chapter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted April 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 I don't know why,It's just most people wait like a week for adding chapters.I think it's to keep viewers more excited for when it's comming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 It does but it also ticks them off XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted April 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2010 I know true,sometimes it makes them think a fan fic is done if it hasn't been updated in months. Anyway England Academy will be my last Yugioh Fan Fic.Therefore, anyone can say a type of fan fic for me to do.I will open a poll when Iv'e got 3 good suggestions and during the end of this fan fic I'll anounce the most popular vote.By the way it will take time to make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted April 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 I've decided to make chapter 4 and 5 early. [spoiler=chapter 4 Destiny And Fallen]31st December, 2099 Today is new years eve I've got to see those 2 duelists who wanted me.It turns out Baron is making an more powerful deck that is like an anti synchro deck, but those cards never turn out good.Im now friends with an Irish kid whos an Beginner Duelist named Patrick who is normaly bullied. __________________________England Academy/Outer Forest___________________________ The Pro Dorm Area was west in the Outer Forest, those Pros must be wanting an odd thing.It maybe nothing to do with Patrick but he still went with me.Patrick was smaller and possible younger than other duelists in England Academy. "I see it,"Gased Patrick pointing at the glimpse of a big building that looked mediam size at their distance. "It's like a mirage in the cold,"I imagined. "That makes no sence." "Ok," As we reached the House it was like a flat,a flat in the middle of the forest. I touched a random switch, when sudenly, the door opened. "Why is every dorm in England Academy in the middle of nowhere when the Academy is like nearby houses ?"Questioned Patrick. "I know Patrick,"I said as Patrick gave me a deadly gase."I mean Pat,anyway It's also weird that the dorms circle England Academy like angles." "Im going Rex, you go onwards." As I left through the narrow corridor Patrick just stood their like a statue. ______________________________Professional Dorm/Hallway_______________________________ When I entered there was a gang of Pros.They were all dressed smart with more decorated duel disks. "Who are you ?"Questioned One of the Pros. "I was told to be here,"I answered. "You know !"the same Pro Shouted."Im going to pound you in a duel." "STOP!"Shouted one of them who appeared to be Destruct.Destruct was like the best Student at Domino Academy until he graduated and moved to the Pro Ledge.The Pro Ledge and The Pro League were great rivals in dueling."I was the one who reported to Proffessor Jin." "You know,"The Pro said leaving with the other 8 ."Lets go guys." "Me and Peter moved here 3 years ago,"Destruct explained."They are having soon starting in March the School Tournement, then the Clash Of The Schools." "The Clash Of The Schools ?"I repeated. "Yes happens once a decade when 1 duelist from here is entered in the Copper Cup.In the Tournement the best duelists in the Schools duel each other in a tornement.However, it requires some serious training." "Like what ?" "Firstly, the Teachers have to find the best student so they pick the top 50 duelists in each dorm to duel each other and break them down somehow into 16 students left." "What do they do with the 16 ?" "They host the England Academy Tournement where the 16 duel in a tournement fasion."Destruct Finished noticing someone behind."Theres also more for me to have a chance I must have a record of 300 wins 0 loses this year." "So you challenge me,"I said pointing to myself."Ok". "Wait I challenge you,"Said the Mystery Person,as I turned around it was Patrick. "PAT!"I shouted in shock."Destructs, a Pro...You'll get pwned," "Yes I'll still do it,"Patrick said."Well In the garden." ________________________Pros Dorm/ Garden__________________________ "LETS DUEL !"They both shouted. "Me first,"Patrick started drawing his cards."I summon Fallen Fairy Nurse in Atk Mode(0/100).I gain 500 Life Points(Pat 4500) I end." "Ha, thats all."Destruct laughed pointing at Patrick."Patrick is an even bigger wimp than Rex." "Thats It."Patrick shouted furiously as his face turned red."Next turn your dead." "Hmp my turn,"Destruct said heroicly."I activate my Special Clock Tower Prison next I summon Destiny Hero-Doom Lord in Atk Mode(600/800). I set a facedown next I order my doom lord to attack your fairy (Patrick 3900)." "Urghh"Patrick feared as wind hit him."M-my turn I summon Fallen Fairy Magican(0/200).My magican gains 700 Atk because theres 1 Fallen Fairy in the Graveyard (700/200).Magican destroy Doom lord (Destruct 3900)." "Why is low attack monsters fighting,"I insulted. "Shut up! When it was your turn my clock gains a counter,"Destruct replied drawing."I summon my Dimond Dude(1400/1600) I equip dimond dude with D-Chain my facedown (1900/1600).Dimond Dude slash that chain."Destruct ordered as dimond dude slashed magican into Patrick (Patrick 2700),then a piece of chains hit Patrick(Patrick 2200)."I set a card." "I guess I should Give up"Patrick moaned as the prison gained It's 2nd counter. "Don't you at least tried and managed to inflict damage on Destruct, he rarely lost life points at the beginning of the time I dueled,then I won."I encouraged. "True,"Destruct said."But the next time we duel I'll win, like our first duel that finished." "Huh oh well my move."Patrick said."Yes I remove my 2 fairys to Special Summon my Fallen Witch Necro (1400/2000).Necro destroys all spells and traps." "I chain with Enternal Dread"Destruct explained as before his prison was destroyed it had it's 4th counter.Then suddenly, behind was Destiny hero Doomlord(600/800) and Dreadmaster(2000/2400). "Oh no"Patrick frowned."I end" "Now I summon Destiny Hero-Captin Tencious in Atk Mode(800/800),now dreadmaster(2800/3200) finish that noobish witch,"Destruct commanded (Pat 600) as magican appeared in Atk Mode(700/200)."Ok then dimond dude kill that magican(Patrick 0)." "Oh no"Patrick whinned."I lost." "Leave"Destruct said turning away."If the teachers catch you, expelled would be the least punishing thing." "Wheres Peter ?"I questioned. "He was dueling some formor skilled pro"Destruct smiled as they left. END OF CHAPTER. [spoiler=chapter 5 Scorpio and Gemini]1st January, 2100 It's finaly the first day of a new century and a lot is going on.Infact, the 50 Pro Duelists have already been picked and the Superior Duelists are next.Patrick, is slightly depressed after dueling Destruct and Peter has finished his duel with a formor Skilled Pro who was demoted to Pro and Peter raised victor. __________________The Dark Plain______________________________ The place was called "The Dark Plain" because the trees above blocked sunlight making it almost pitch black in day.Even in the darkness Gemini was still easy to be seen.Mac Guiness jumped out a tree and walked slowly to the stone. "It's mine." "What ?"Mac wondered looking behind him as he shouted."Come out !" "Ok,"said the mystery person came out the bushes.He held Scorpio on his left hand."Names Zakria, how about a short duel to the shadows winner gets both stones." "Fine,"Mac quickly said as him and Zakria sank into a shadowy pit. _________________________Rex's Room_______________________ As I was sleeping someone was knocking on the door. "Come on"Patrick answered. "Pat, is that you."I replied drewy."Are you better from yesterday." "Yes,"Pat remembered."Meet at the docks." I got up after Pat left and got ready.When suddenly, a noise of a crowd was heard.I opened the door. _____________________Apprentice Duelist Dorm-Outside____________ "Quiet everbody," Jin calmly exclaimed."Explain about whats happening." "Mac is gone"A Person started. "He disappeared during the party"Another Person corrected. "We also heard screaming,"The last Person finished. "What happened ?"I questioned walking down the stairs. "Mac Guiness, a Pro is gone,"The First Person explained."We checked around our Pro Dorm. "Urghh,"Jin said putting his hand on his head in stress."That's it im going to check the Abandoned Dorm." "Abandoned Dorm ?"I questioned. "Yes like in that tv series Yugioh GX there is realy an Abandoned Dorm in every Academy"Jin replied going into longer talk."However, it is not haunted by creeps like Titan." "Another question"I said."I thought Jaden Yuki was a real person ?" "This is nothing to do with Jaden"Jin stressed again."Hes dead but those shows are their autobio." After that the crowd of 3 people split and Jin walked to the Abandoned Dorm.I decided to go to the Docks. _____________________Docks_________________________________ "So what is it ?"Baron asked to Patrick just when I came up to them. "Well...Oh there you are Rex ,"Patrick was distracted."Onto topic have you heard the rumour ?" "Mac's disappearence" "Yes I've also found that if we find the cause of it we will get better rooms, "Jin said excited."Like fridges." "Yep they have gone a fridge to far"I joked. "To the Abandoned Dorm"I answered. ______________________Abandoned Dorm-Outside________________ The dorm was ancient as Cancer, I was suprised it hasn't fallen apart it has broken windows and no door, just a giant hole in the wall where the door should be.As the 3 walked they encountered into a mystery person. "Halt !"the guy shouted."ZOM only." "What ?!"the 3 shrieked. "ZODIAC ORGANISATION MEMBERS!!!"the guy screeched."Oh no I just told a bunch of losers the name of our organisation." "Yep"I salted."I have Cancer so I can enter right." "Nope, the leader would tortuer me"The Minon sulked ,then 5 minutes later he just realised."You just said you have Cancer ?". "Yes." "I have to duel you"The Minon signed as red flames circled the area. "Stop"said Peter just entering before blocked."What's going on ?" "SHUT UP!!"shouted the Minon."Oh names Ralph REX VS Ralph "Ok I summon DD Warrior in Atk Mode(1200/1000)."Ralph summoned proudly."I set one card then end." "A DD deck,"Baron wised."He must have dimensional portal somewhere." "DD ?"repeated Patrick. "The DD archtype are like supports to getting removed from pla"Peter Answered. "I summon Brave Warrior in Atk Mode(1600/1000),Brave Warrior attack"Rex commanded as Brave Warrior launched up in the air and stiked DD Warrior down(Ralph 3600 Life Points).Afterwards, both of the monsters vanished."What !?" "My dd removed itself with your Brave Warrior, removed like that gu Zakrai encountered when chasing Gemini"Ralph answered."My turn I summon DD Survivor in Atk Mode(1800/1200).Direct attack (Rex 2200).I end with dimensional portal" "Urghhh"Rex sulked in pain."It hurts more than a shadow duel." "As a Minon of Zodiac I have the power to make my Opponant suffer"Ralph explained."Only works at a lower kind." "My turn it is, I summon Commando Synchron in Atk Mode(1800/0)."I started."Next I activate double summon so next I summon Speed Warrior in Atk Mode(1800/400),Commando Synchron's effect boosts Speed Warriors Atk by 500(2300/400)."Rex boasted staring at his 2 ready monsters."Speed Warrior attack Survivor and Commando Synchron attack Ralph.(Ralph 1300 Life Points). "Hmp luck"Ralph said."I know our Speed Warrior's Atk change back (1400/400)." "It's almost over"Peter guessed. "Yes soon my turn, I summon DD Warrior Lady in Atk Mode(1500/1200)."Ralph commanded while smilling."DD Warrior Lady attack Speed Warrior(Rex 2100) also they both are removed from play,I activate DD Bomb inlicting 1500 points of damage to you (Rex 600)." "Is that all"I smilled. "Hmm I miss calculated how much damage"Ralph ended his smile. "I thought Ralph would win but he was bluffing"Patrick said. "Im going to hit you"Baron angered joking to Patrick. "Ye canny hit me"Patrick laughed. "Now my turn"I ended without drawing as his commando synchron attacked Ralph(Ralph 0). "Ill finish you next time"Ralph shouted as he faded into darkness. "Next time ill be a better duelist."I said. "I got owned easily"Ralph answered his last word as the fire vanished. "Whats Going On !?"Jin shouted with a question entered behind the trees."Who was the person who was sent to darkness ?" "He was one of the people who took Mac."Patrick bravely answered. "You have found the person, hes shady so he could be a Zodiac,"Jin guessed."What reward would you like ?" "Fridges please,"The 3 of us said. END OF CHAPTER Also for dd soldier I didn't know his Atk, does anbody know ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cthonian Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 Alright, instead of waiting until Sunday for one chapter, today I get 2 chapters! YAY! Good job by the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted April 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 Thanks and Ill make chapter 6 on Sunday and chapter 7 sometime next week if chorse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kip~ Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 DD Warrior has 1200 ATK, and since i got rid of the link to my deck that was in my sig: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-178742.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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