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I've decided to post Chapter 16 now.

 

[spoiler=chapter 16 The Unknown Duelist]

3rd Febuary, 2100

 

Destruct and Peter have both collected 9 Duel Cards, while Patrick still has 5 and I have not found a challenger yet. I still remember Yesturday, about what happened, a great disaster.

 

__________________Docks_______________________________

 

On the Eastern Area of England Academy was an known Docks, the River Thames was the River on the Docks. The Docks was a popular place now that the Compertision was going on, people would just sit there and relax and watch the entertainment...Of Clowns. I walked there with Patrick as I sat down to watch, there was 3 Clowns, at first the Left One who was a tall jester.Second the Right One, an also tall clumsy Clown. The Middle Clown, was the shortest of the Clowns, hovering on a big ball, juggling Balling Pins.

 

"Rex, you know im afraid of Clowns,"Patrick muttered in a nerous reaction.

 

"This is the main place I could find a challenge, a Duelist who will perhaps duel me,"I replied muttering as the Middle Clown jumped off the ball heading in my direction."

 

"You want a challenge...."The Clown insisted as He pointed at me."I Challenge you to a Childrens Card Game ! In America !"

 

"It's called a Duel,"I corrected."And we are in Britain."

 

"Whatever, I'll steal your Dollar."Grunted the Clown as he yanked the £20 out of my hand and ran away heading for a Warehouse."Meet me there...In America,"

 

"It's Pounds and we are in BRITAIN."I replied.

 

"Shut up and follow me, in America."laughed the Clown as he lept up the stairs and charged through the door.

 

"IN BRITAIN !"I repeated following through the door.

 

"Urghhh, this is going to be stress."yelped Patrick going through.

 

"We just got ditched."frowned the 1st Clown.

 

"Lets report to the Boss,"Suggested the 2nd as they both went in the opposite direction as the Main Clown.

 

_____________________Warehouse___________________

 

"Muhha,"laughed the Clown who was on an Duel Machine that was created in the Beginning of the Modern Yugioh."Come and bet your Duel Cards In America."

 

"I have 1,"I frowned as the Clown laughed in superior.

 

"3 is what I have,"the Clown contiuned to laughed,"Lets Duel in an American machine that Yugi and Kaiba first dueled on."

 

"Their Japanise Machines, fine my move."I snapped as I drew,"I Summon Brave Warrior in Atk Mode(1600/1000) and I set 1 Face Down, I end."

 

"That all,"the Clown silenced as he removed the curtain behind him and an massive computer machine appeared behind it, as he pressed a button on it, a keyboard appeared next to him with a laptop."Ha-my turn."

 

"What is going on ?"Patrick wondered as he Clown chuckled.

 

"I activate Clown Summon, so I can Special Summon 3 Clown Tokens in Def Mode(0/0), next I Summon Cannon Soldier in Atk Mode(1400/1300)."the Clown smiled as a tremor happened, soon Cannon Soldier appeared.However, the Clown pressed a Mystery Button on the keyboard that made Cannon Soldier glow bright white.

 

"Whats going on ?"Patrick once again repeated.

 

"Yeah, your cheating, because you need to pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon those Clown Tokens,"I remembered as I noticed Cannon Soldier stop glowing as it's attack changed somehow(3000/3000)."You Cheater Thats Against The Rules !"

 

"Screw The Rules I Have American Money,"The Clown smiled as another tremor happened."Names Cance."

 

"What !?"Patrick reacted,"Cance is an famous American Card Taker."

 

"Now Card Collecter,"Cance boasted typing something on the computer,"I've edited Cannon Soldiers effect now want to read, His attack is now what is shown on the screem and I can tribute 1 monster to make him attack any number of times, since im American it will be a lot"

 

"3 Clown Tokens, 3 Attacks."Patrick replied in a shocked way.

 

"I tribute 1 Clown Token for my Cannon Soldier to attack Brave Warrior,"commanded Cance as Brave Warrior blew to dust (Rex 2600 Life Points),"Now a direct attack since I tribute the 2nd Clown Token, America is superior."

 

"Not so fast I activate Brave Warriors Effect you see I can remove a Brave Counter to Special Summon my Brave Warrior back (Rex 1200 Life Points),"I smiled as Cance snarled.

 

"You Non Americans, can't survive the next I tribute the last Clown Token for direct attack,"grinned Cance as a even bigger tremor happend.

 

"NOOO !"I begged for mercy as I staggered by the tremor as I remembered, reaching for my face down,"I ac-activate Life And Death, I pay half my Life Points to Special Summon Brave Warrior back in Atk Mode and negates the attack, plus your Cannon Soldier is destroyed (1600/1000)(Rex 600 Life Points)."

 

"Puny non Americans I activate Premature Berial Special Summoning back my Cannon Soldier in Atk Mode (3000/3000)(Cance 3200 Life Points)."Cance smerked.2I end."

 

"Take this."shouted a Voice as an Duelist riding a Duel Runner smashed through the window as threw a stick at the Computer as it smashed."Ha."

 

"YOU FOOLS!!!"shouted Cance as everything returned to normal (1400/1300)(Cance 2200 Life Points),"URGHHH!!!"

 

"I had to stop cheating,"admitted the Duelist as it turned out to be Neo Cadi.

 

"Time to end this,"I drew."I summon Commando Synchron in Atk Mode (2000/0), he boosts Brave Warriors Atk by 500(2100/1000), next I remove a Brave Counter to boost Brave Warriors Atk once again(2600/1000), now Commando Synchron attack Cannon Soldier (Cance 1600 Life Points)."

 

"Don't you or America will get our revenge in World War IV, but unlike III what happend when the Germans bribed us to go against you even though they wrote that agreement,"Cance staggered as he begged for mercy.

 

"Nope, because Brave Warrior attack this cheating theiving American !"I commanded as the American Clown flew away."That Clown is insulting America (Cance 0 Life Points)."

 

"AHHHHHHHHH!!!!"shouted Cance as he vanished from sight in the sky.

 

"Neo sumhow vanished,"sulked Patrick.

 

"Yes what I good day, I've retrived my £20, I've won 3 Duel Cards and I've won Cannon Soldier from that American since he dropped it."I cheered to myself.

 

__________________________Somewhere in the Forest___________________

 

"Boss."came the 1st Clowns as they bowed to the Card Collecter Leader.

 

"Our Ringleader Clown has fallen." the 2nd Clown answered.

 

"Hmp, pathetic, I'll send another Elite to support you Minons..."The Leader answered."And stop dueling Children, try for once take down a ZO."

 

"Yes sir."exclaimed the Clowns.

 

"And take that Clown Costume OFF!!!!"

 

END OF CHAPTER

 

 

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True, now for chapter 17...It sadly has no duels in it.

 

[spoiler=chapter 17 The Truth Of Zodiac]

4th Febuary, 2100

 

After my victory nothing interesting happened, I still question the power of those stones. I know their valuble, but I still wonder why the Zodiac Organisation is collecting those stones for their goal ?

 

____________________Abandoned Dorm/Outside_______________________

 

Brian and his surviving Minon stood their waiting by the door of the Abandoned Dorm waiting. When suddenly, the Mysterious Zodiac Organisation Leader walked up to Brian slow and steady, as the mystery circle shadow under him followed.

 

"Master,"welcomed Brian as the Minon quickly bowed, then sortly Brian bowed.

 

"You've been sucessful Brian,"compimented the Leader as nobody could see his face, nevermind if it's smiling."We've only got a few thousand left to capture until we have enough souls to unlease Zodiac but...You haven't found the located Zodiac Stone that I sensed here."

 

"I will find it soon,"Brian insisted.

 

"You must, overwise I will have to send more to search and then you will not be holding the Glory."The Leader replied.

 

"I understand."Brian ended leaving away with his Minon.

 

____________________Apprentice Dorm/Rex's Room_________________

 

"Im almost their,"I talked to myself as I grew slightly bored,"Without Cancer,Duel Monster Spirts or my Friends, it gets very boring."

 

"Theirs a problem,"shouted a Voice outside as he contiuned."It's me Patrick...Go to the forest."

 

"Ok."I replied starting to wonder,"What is it ?"

 

"Nevermind."

 

________________________Eastern Forest_______________________

 

"What is going on !"I shouted as I noticed I came up to Brian and a Minon."What !?"

 

"We are behind,"Patrick wispered from the bushes as I turned back.

 

"Come Out !"Brian shouted as he noticed them,"You were spying on me this hole time."

 

"Yes."Patrick admitted with stress as Peter also came out.

 

"So why are you wanting these Zodiac Stones ?"Peter wondered to Brian.

 

"I'll tell since you won't make it out,"Brian explained,"These stones hold invincible power, each stone holds and beast in it that holds this ancient power."

 

"Like What ?"I contiuned.

 

"Firstly, the holder gains immortality."Brian chuckled."Secondly, if the holder cannot see Duel Monster Spirts, they gain the power to see them...However, if the holder doesn't have the stone like losses it the massive number of powers doesn't work."

 

"So theirs more,"I replied.

 

"Yes, but you won't figure it out."Brian laughed setting up his duel disk.

 

"Stop !!!"shouted the Leader,"Brian we have no time we must go to the meeting."

 

"Yes master,"Brian bowed as he putted the duel disk back,"Next time."

 

"Huh."I said comfused as the 3 vanished,"Quite werid."

 

END OF CHAPTER

 

 

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Chapter 18 is finaly up !

 

[spoiler=chapter 18 Brian's Final Minon]

5th Febuary, 2100

 

As the day goes through slowly and steadily, I wonder if I have a chance of getting in the Tournement that happens next Month. I must be one of the 16 people with a chance to advance to that Clash Of The Schools thing...How random.

 

__________________________Abandoned Dorm/Outside_____________________

 

"Minon come !"Brian commanded staring at his Minon who approached him,"I've got a mission for you, it's secret so you can't let this get out."

 

"Yes , Commander,"The Minon bowed lowering his head slightly.

 

"You know those people yesturday ?"Brian questioned.

 

"I remember,"The Minon replied nodding.

 

"You must get rid of them,"Brian answered."We cannot have them spoiling the Zodiac Organisation's secrets when they come the day after tommorrow."

 

"Ok,"The Minon understood as he raised his head to where it was before, he silently crept through the woods searching for his targets.

 

"Now that he has got his mission, I must do mine,"Brian calmly smiled.

 

"Mission ?"a Voice replied questioning.

 

"What !"Brian startled as the person appeared as it was the Leader Of Zodiac Organisation, as always his face was hidden under the dark cloak and he had a Golden Crown on his head for people to recognise him.

 

"You gave that Minon an seperate mission..."The Leader remembered,"What is it ?"

 

"Well to..."Brian was puzzled trying to think of something else,"Collect more.....Souls."

 

"Nevermind,"The Leader replied with suspision as he vanished away as a piece of paper flew into Brian's hands."I have collected Imformation, you must understand, DO NOT FAIL ME, I have big plans if you suceed."

 

"So the stone that is located here before is called...Capricorn, hmm interesting and the Card Collecters have gained a different Zodiac Stone."Brian skimmed through it as he slowly putted it in his bag, he turned back and walked through the woods,"Time for me to find Capricorn."

 

_____________________Western Forest______________________________

 

"Look a Minon,"knew Destruct as he turned to it.

 

"A Minon of Brian's I think,"Peter guessed.

 

"How did you know the name of the person with Libra ?"Patrick questioned.

 

"Don't know...I just somehow,"Peter shrugged as he got comfused.

 

"Hes comming closer,"I interrupted staring at the Minon.

 

"I shall elliminate you 4 in a Shadow Duel,"The Minon anounced staring back at me, Black Flames emerged from bellow and then rised surrounding them.

 

"Im nothing to do with this so im going,"Destruct replied as he was the first to notice the Black circle surround them as the Shadow Duel Began.

 

"Here is a nice place to duel,"The Minon guessed as he set up his duel disk,"Who wants to duel."

 

"I guess I will,"I walked up to the Minon."What's your name ? And do you have any Duel Cards ?"

 

"My name is a name that you will recognise when I say and no I don't have any Duel Cards to bet in your pathetic attempt, since im not entering that rubish Tournement,"The Minon mocked.

 

"Tell me your name !?"I questioned in slight anger.

 

"Morph,"The Minon smiled as I, Destruct and Peter were shocked.

 

"Who ?"Patrick replied.

 

"Morph was at Domino Academy the school I went to,"I replied forgetting some things.

 

"And then he was tained to the tempation of the Dark Signers who decided to invade Domino Academy for no reason at all, I wonder if they were Dark Signers at all."Destruct secondly replied.

 

"Then I was forced to duel Morph with my formor deck...It ended with me victor."Peter ended.

 

"Change of plans,"Morph smiled."In the Shadow Realm, MUHHA."

 

"I'll duel you."I said as he Darkness pulled us all in.

 

___________________Shadow Realm________________________

 

"Lets Duel !"we both shouted as Morph's voice got darker.

 

"Me first,"I exclaimed drawing."I Summon Brave Warrior in Atk Mode (1600/1000), I end."

 

"Pathetic as always,"Morph laughed drawing,"I Summon Morphitronic Celfon in Atk Mode (100/100), I will activate his effect throwing a dice...It's a 1 so I look at the top card of my deck and if it's a Morphitronic Monster I can Special Summon it...It's Morphitronic Borden in Def Mode (500/1800), I end with a Face Down."

 

"My turn,"I drew."I remove my 2 Brave Counters to boost my Brave Warrior's attack by a mightly 1000 (2600/1000), next I summon Commando Synchron in Atk Mode (2000/0), Commando Synchron's attack make Brave Warrior's 3100."

 

"NOOO !!!"Morph shouted.

 

"Yes, first my Brave Warrior will attack Celfon, followed by Commando Synchron...Even though Borden's effect stops Celfon's destruction you still have 0 life points."

 

"I activate Ring Of Destruction destroying my Celfon (Morph 3900 Life Points/Rex 3900 Life Points), so then your Brave Warrior has to attack my Borden."Morph smiled in guilt of pain."Then your Commando will attack me directly then (Morph 1900 Life Points)."

 

"This must be a real Shadow Duel,"Destruct suggested.

 

"Yes."Morph chocked in pain."The losers sent to everlasting Darkness."

 

"Well this might end quickly,"Peter admitted.

 

"I Summon Morphitronic Raidon in Atk Mode (1000/900), his effect boosts Atk by 800 (1800/900) when hes in Atk Mode, next I activate Premature Berial paying 800 to Special Summon Morphitronic Borden in Atk Mode (Morph 1100 Life Points)(1300/1800), both will attack you directly (Rex 600 Life Points)."Morph ended as he set a face down.

 

"This is over, Brave Warrior attack Borden."I smiled as Brave Warrior charged with massive power.

 

"Not so fast,"Morth chuckled as he revealed his face down Ring Of Destruction as he went around Brave Warrior as a great explosion happened (Morph 0 Life Points/Rex 0 Life Points),"This is over us 5 will fall into The Zodiac Dungeon MUUAH !"

 

"How unfair,"Destruct, Peter and Patrick frowned.

 

END OF CHAPTER

 

 

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Nice reference from NDAB3 with Peter's old Deck and about Morph. Nice chapter nonetheless. I still think it would make more sense for Peter to be challenged, like Morph wanted revenge or something but that worked.

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Thanks, im sorry I updated the title. True Grasslander it would work better, but I was in a rush...Peter will be dueling someone soon and chapter 19 will be at the end of the week. How about a spoiler showing somethings going on in chapter 19.

 

[spoiler=Spoiler Of Chapter 19]

An chapter showing 2 duels happening also holding an shocking secret of one of the powers Zodiac Stones all hold, that will show that aren't just orginary, ancient stones. Chapter 20 will hold the 2nd Part !

 

 

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You know, you regularly post on my fan fic, and yet I honestly have never noticed yours! I'm sorry! Ugh, now I feel like a jerk!

 

Sadly, while reading some of it, I realized that you really need to check your spelling and grammar, but more importantly, you barely describe anything. Appearances, places, passage of time, ect. I'd highly suggest you fix some of that before Crab Helmet reviews your first chapter, so that it looks slightly better.

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