Sessha Nagato Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 Aright, another attempt at a card...I'm not good at making awesome effects so tell me if this effect is overpowered or too bland, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProSora Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 1. Fiend Battler isnt a type, do Fiend or Warrior, then add when this card is face-up it is also treated as2. correction: You can pay 1000 Life Points to Tribute this face-up monster to destroy 1 DARK monster your opponent controls alright the pic is alright, though it is stressed, for a lvl 6 monster is it kinda UP, because you have to pay 1000 life points which is enough and you have to tribute this monster, so you can remove one of those effects, then it will balance out, until then 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kusha Shmaku Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 Nice Card :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sunshine angel Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 decent card a little bland though but keep working on it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jayjack Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 A guide on how to make a stupid effect look awesome (by JayJack): Make it long. So long that you can't read it from the card itself and have to post the lore (Which you should always do! EVERY SINGLE TIME! Even if it's just 2 words)A guide on how to make a great card look stupid (By JayJack): Make fun of stupid things like the name or image. Or how this card could have make possible OTK. Or how you can relate the nuke effect to Judgment dragon and yet again explain how broken judgment dragon is. That's right. I make guides =O Well, its not THAT bad, but its also not that good. A lvl6 who kills themself and takes 1k lp to kill a DARK monster... just to specific. UD7/10 strongly suggest you look over effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adogadog8 Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 Its ATK could be higher for a level 6 monster (Jinzo is OPED to me and has 2400 ATK) so yeah, and its base effect is good, but you should give some phazzazz to it.6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 It is WAY to Uped. It would be best just to keep it on the field. What if the opponent doesn't have a DARK monster. What then? 4.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sessha Nagato Posted March 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 It is WAY to Uped. It would be best just to keep it on the field. What if the opponent doesn't have a DARK monster. What then? 4.7/10 If the opponent doesn't have a dark monster...don't activate the effect? Haha. I didn't mean like every turn you can do it. Only once.Yeah, I couldn't think of what a Fiend Battler-ish card would be called...I'll switch it to Warrior.Updated, OCG, ATK, card type. Is it better now?Sorry, I haven't seen a Yu-gi-oh card in ages, so it's kinda like seeing them for the first time now XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 Lifepoints should be Life Points just say send 1 DARK monster on your opponent's side of the field to the Graveyard too boring of an effect. It's also UPed for only once per duel. I'd make it once per turn instead. Then, as a drawback, during your opponent's turn, he/she can pay 1000 LP himself/herself to return the DARK monster you just destroyed back to his/her hand 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LourDeath Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 sir sessha where do i find the TCG threads can't find it XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sessha Nagato Posted March 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 No idea what the TCG threads even are....I'm new as well XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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