TheGiver Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 This card is from a set i am making that has the types combined like Beast-WarriorEffect:You must Tribute 5 monsters to Normal Summon this card.This card gains the effect of any monster it destroys.If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card is removed from the field, except by its own effect, destroy all face-up monsters your opponent controls, and inflict 800 damage to your opponent for each monster destroyed.If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's ATK.While this card is in face-up Defense Position, your opponent cannot conduct their Battle Phase. Once per turn, you can inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the DEF of this card. This card cannot attack the turn this effect is used.When this card is Normal Summoned, return up to 3 cards you control to your Deck, except this card, and discard the same number of cards from your opponent's hand at random. This card gains 1000 ATK for each card discarded by this effect.This card is destroyed at the End Phase unless you pay half your Life Points each Standby Phase. This card has some effects of the earthbound immortals Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangketan Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 cool but the name is hard to see[8/10]with improvements and correctionsit'll be [8.2/10] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted March 23, 2010 Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 1. Oh my dear god. OP'ed! I'm sorry, the final effect does NOT balance the card out.2. I noticed a few errors, which I would fix, but your effect is a few stories too high.3. Try being less rambling. Basically, your card is just a big collection of different effects.4. Poor concept. You could just add "This card is also treated as a Pyro-Type monster" into the effect. Also, for it to make sense, it would have to be Pyro-Fiend.5. I have to admit, you have a really awesome picture. ;D6. Corny name. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiver Posted March 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2010 thanks i think that i have some corrections to makeI made some and changed the name and took some of the effect out but the field card that are for it go with there double type it is to long to explain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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