Black Mechanical Beasts

[orangketan]

just a few from my Black Metal monsters:

any corrections needed?

[Aibara]

First of all, you should write the effects of the cards, below the cards. Then, it would be easier to read them. You can, also, use the spoiler-trick. As I've seen, you know how to post spoilers. Well done!(I say Well done, because it took me a long time to find out how spoilers work! LOL!)

And now about the cards.

Pics: Your pics are good. They don't have borders and aren't blurry. But you should find pics with backgrounds! They look better!;-)

Effects:

1st) was-->is/ field-->Field/ graveyard-->Graveyard/ and-->to/ deck-->Deck/

2nd) was-->is/ graveyard-->Graveyard/ and-->to/ deck-->Deck/

3rd) was-->is/ graveyard-->Graveyard/ and-->to/ deck-->Deck/

Hmm... The OCG errors aren't very important and they're the same. That means, you have only 5 OCG errors! Well done! Very good for a LV2 member! And here's a tipp: make threads that have at least one Magic, one Trap, one Fusion or/and Synchro and/or Ritual. If you do so, the combos[as I tell them] can be great! I mean, the Ritual could help the Fusion, and a Magic could help that Fusion, too, etc..

Anyway, here's the rating... 8/10!

[orangketan]

Actually I still have more Support cards for this collection but anyways thanks for the corrections.. I just knew how to use spoilers just 3 days ago :D