My newest Synchro

[Yang Xiao-Long]

This card will be my 100th post (personally I don't see the big deal about why people care about 100 posts, since you need more than that for 3 stars anyway...)

 

Anyway, here's my card.

 

Image by Jazin Kay

 

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Lore:

1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more WIND non-Tuner monsters

This card is also treated as a WIND monster. This card inflicts Piercing Damage. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, Negate the activation of any of your opponent's Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster's effect that targets a face-up monster on your field, and destroy that card. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you can send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to negate the activation of a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster's effect. If that card was a Monster Card, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's original ATK. Damage inflicted by this card is halved during the turn this effect is activated.[/align]

 

Rates/comments greatly appreciated. Let me know what you think.

[byak]

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot activate card effects that target cards in your Monster Card Zone

 

Should actually be

 

Negate the activation of any of your opponent's Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster's effect that targets a face-up monster, and destroy that card

 

And then

 

the effect of 1 card on the field

 

Should actually be

 

the activation of a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster's effect

 

There's also the piercing thing, but it would seem logical to keep it like that to fit the text on the card, I guess.

It's still incorrect, though.

 

OP'd, in general.

[Yang Xiao-Long]

Thanks for corrections, Byak!

Fixed.

 

And the "Piercing Damage" thing...it's a shorter version of "During battle between this card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points."

You can find Piercing Damage on Cyberdark Horn's effect.

[byak]

Thanks for corrections' date=' Byak!

Fixed.

 

And the "Piercing Damage" thing...it's a shorter version of "During battle between this card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points."

You can find Piercing Damage on Cyberdark Horn's effect.

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I hate when people say that.

That's old OCG. New OCG for piercing is wrote out as the long effect.

[DA Ripper]

Excellent Pic, 10/10, nice effect....

[έκλειψη]

... I believe it isn't. Cyberdark Horn was out AFTER Mad sword beast, which has the long one. Unless it changed back, Cyberdark's is still the most recent.

[ragnarok1945]

"If that card was a Monster Card, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's original ATK." <---only for this I'd put some limit to it

 

otherwise you can burn your opponent for more than 2500 points, and that's too much

 

8.9/10