.:Traceur:. Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 I like the fic...just add more description and the only thing I didn't like is the moment when the mark suddenly appeared on they arm..you should describe their reactions on the circle around them and the marks..from that what you wrote you could say that are not surprised and that they already saw that..you must add more emotions to the story..but overall it's ok..:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted April 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 Chapter 4 has been added I know it's Kinda short I just wanted the next chapter to be the whole duel lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 im excited to see my guy duel! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 I just noticed that kelly summoned planted psychic but you didn't post the card or did you made a mistake and there should be written potted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted April 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 It meant to say Potted Psychic lol I fixed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 when do you think the next chapter will be up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 I like it. And Kuro, apologizes for my behavior for earlier. But I am curious on how my character would be potrayed though..... Aside from that: Again, I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 Kuro, do you know when my guy will show his face? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 Kuro' date=' do you know when my guy will show his face?[/quote'] Apologizes man, but he asked us not too ask that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 You rock kuro!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 ok sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted April 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 Kuro' date=' do you know when my guy will show his face?[/quote'] Apologizes man, but he asked us not too ask that. The next chapter should be up sometime today(= You rock kuro!!! And thanks Fry and JJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted April 8, 2010 Report Share Posted April 8, 2010 awesome! srry about my impatience... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted April 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Chapter cinco is up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 nice duel. short, but still works. can't wait for part 2 or chapter 6 (which ever comes 1st) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 you're right, his new deck totally pwns Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hariken Posted April 11, 2010 Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 I am waiting patiently Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hariken Posted April 12, 2010 Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 What is taking so long? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hariken Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 Seriously why is nobody even commenting on this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hariken Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 If you aren't continuing then please say something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted April 18, 2010 Report Share Posted April 18, 2010 Calm down, Hariken. Most fanfics take a while to write; Kuro's is probably the same way. Also, people spend some time doing other stuff than fanfics. If its like two months, than yeah, you could say something like that, but its only been a little over a week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted April 23, 2010 Report Share Posted April 23, 2010 I'm impatient too, but I think willpower's right, he's probably away doing something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted April 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2010 SUPER SORRY FOR THE LONG WAIT. I will get to chapter 6 ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted April 28, 2010 Report Share Posted April 28, 2010 woohoo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted May 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2010 Okay here I am and Chapter 6 will be up today and I mean IT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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