cruelnoob200 Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 Here is my new card!Sorry for the bad imaging i was limited on time.Lore:["Obelisk The Tormentor" + "Slifer The Sky Dragon" + "The Winged Dragon Of Ra"]This card can only be Fusion Summoned by removing from play the above monsters and by paying your Life Points until you have 50 left. The ATK of this card is determined by the number of cards in your Deck, your side of the field, in your Graveyard, and your monsters Removed from play times 100. If your opponent summons a monster this card must declare an attack on the monster (regardless of position). The Summoning of this card cannot be negated. All Effects of Spell, Trap, or Effect Monsters are negated (except this card). If this card attacks a Defense position monster who's DEF is lower then the ATK of this card, inflict the difference battle damage to you opponent. If this card attacks a Defense position monster who's DEF is lower then the ATK of this card, you gain the difference in battle damage. Any Battle damage this card inflicts to you opponent is doubled. ENJOY AND RATE YOUR HIGHESTP.S. If i made any errors plz post:Doops i should add that you must discard all cards in your hand and that all monsters on your side of the field are destroyed and RFP'd (besides fusion material monsters) Your opponent may summon as many monsters from his/her deck, hand, graveyard, RFP'd and so on to their side of the field. There. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 Oh sheet, what am I even looking at? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bakupenguin Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 OPED TO THE MAX!!!! 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DA Ripper Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 pathetic, just pathetic, 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max. Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 lolno.0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emerald Fan Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 Way overpowered even for a God. The pic is terrible and there are extensive OCG errors. Overall, its a horrible card. 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 24, 2010 Report Share Posted March 24, 2010 the picture is blurry as hell there's major OCG errors, and this is OPed even by DIVINE standards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cruelnoob200 Posted March 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 haha sorry i was really limited on time (like 2min to make image and 1min to do Lore =/)ALRIGHT THEN HOW BOUT THIS ONE!Waaaaaaaaay better image and i reduced it's power a bit =Dthx for the comments tho i was a little discouraged after reading the comments =/ LORE:["Obelisk The Tormentor" + "Slifer The Sky Dragon" + "The Winged Dragon Of Ra"]This card can only be Fusion Summoned by removing from play the above monsters and by paying your Life Points until you have 50 left. The ATK of this card is equal to the number of cards in your Deck, your side of the field, in your Graveyard, and your monsters Removed from play times 100. This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangketan Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 haha sorry i was really limited on time (like 2min to make image and 1min to do Lore =/)ALRIGHT THEN HOW BOUT THIS ONE!Waaaaaaaaay better image and i reduced it's power a bit =Dthx for the comments tho i was a little discouraged after reading the comments =/ LORE:["Obelisk The Tormentor" + "Slifer The Sky Dragon" + "The Winged Dragon Of Ra"]This card can only be Fusion Summoned by removing from play the above monsters and by paying your Life Points until you have 50 left. The ATK of this card is equal to the number of cards in your Deck' date=' your side of the field, in your Graveyard, and your monsters Removed from play times 100. This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned.[/quote'] [0/10] very blurry pic and too complicated effect. That card is sooo bad and Fusion SUmmoning it is the same as winning Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alzeid Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Quite, the first one is a complete duel finisher. It's too OP for general (and non-general) play, so 0/10. ["Obelisk The Tormentor" + "Slifer The Sky Dragon" + "The Winged Dragon Of Ra"]This card can only be Fusion Summoned by removing from play the above monsters and by paying your Life Points until you have 50 left. The ATK of this card is equal to the number of cards in your Deck' date=' your side of the field, in your Graveyard, and your monsters Removed from play times 100. This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned.[/quote'] This edit is a step in the right direction; however, that's like like one step out of a hundred. The grammar and lack of detail aside, it does prompt a unique (or rather, rare) strategy- "pack as many cards into your deck as possible"- in order to make this card most effective. However, with that many cards, who is ever going to ever get all three god cards on the field? (On that note, specify where these three can be removed from; field only? field and hand?) So, in a odd way, it is somewhat balanced... >_< Still not worth using though: 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow wind Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 -10/10 BTW isnt that hamon, raphiel and uria, the sacred beasts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucciola Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Yeah I think the second pic is of those sacred beast though if you look at it they're just bargain base copies of the gods anyway so i guess it shouldn't make too big a difference since they do look fairly similar, and yes the first one definitely needed that edit it and has now become a better card and thankfully rules in the game itself to my knowledge actually limits the number of cards a person can have anyway. So I'd say 7/10 maybe, just because it does have some flaws which is good to avoid over powering it and the defense is low enough to make it susceptible to attack but the problem is like Alzeid said, you may want to specify where you can remove these cards from because it's basically close to impossible to get all three god cards on your side of the field without some kind of card combo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teh ZWOOTS Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Quite' date=' the first one is a complete duel finisher. It's too OP for general (and non-general) play, so [b']-1/10.[/b] ["Obelisk The Tormentor" + "Slifer The Sky Dragon" + "The Winged Dragon Of Ra"]This card can only be Fusion Summoned by removing from play the above monsters and by paying your Life Points until you have 50 left. The ATK of this card is equal to the number of cards in your Deck' date=' your side of the field, in your Graveyard, and your monsters Removed from play times 100. This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned.[/quote'] This edit is a step in the right direction; however, that's like like one step out of a hundred. The grammar and lack of detail aside, it does prompt a unique (or rather, rare) strategy- "pack as many cards into your deck as possible"- in order to make this card most effective. However, with that many cards, who is ever going to ever get all three god cards on the field? (On that note, specify where these three can be removed from; field only? field and hand?) So, in a odd way, it is somewhat balanced... >_< Still not worth using though: 2/10 I agree with this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 For the 1st card:The pic is a mess x1000!The OCG errors are a mess x10! For the 2nd card:Those on the pic are not the 3 Egyptian Gods!!!The OCG errors are still a mess!very bad...-1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ash_202457 Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 1st-oped2nd-to complicatedCan't see the pics cause the f***in computer wont load it!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legokun Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 Ok, Let's add up your score:Pic: AHHHHHHHHHH! MY EYES! THEY BURN!Effect: (Same as above.)Card Type: Divine, nothing new.Originality: Very Low.Overall Score: 10/100.Sorry, needs ALOT of improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueEyes22 Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 this is about the 2nd card.the pic shows the 3 sacred beasts,so get a new one. The ATK and DEF are UPed to me. They are the exact same as obelisks! BEUD could destroy tht AND wipe out your LP since you only have 50 left. So raise the ATK and DEF. Also if it has an effect it needs to say effect in its type along with Divine-Beast. The no attacking on the first turn this is summoned is good though. Also how are the 3 gods removed from play? are they on the field> You need to specify tht. And also for ease of summoning you should probably have it be a normal fusion summon and use polymerization. Poly's effect is cards for the fusion can be on the field or in your HAND. That means tht if you have the 3 gods in your hand along with Polymerization, you can fusion summon him right away! I think tht is much better than removed from play. Also if this were in a deck i would load the deck with poly's, super Polymerizations and fusion sages, so it would be easy to summon. That way you have i higher chance of summoning it. otherwise if you stick with the remove from play summoning, load it with soul releases and maybe RFTDD? PM me when you have taken this int consideration please :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest miura II Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 I don't care what the other people said about this but God cards are supposed to be OPED I also read the description but i didn't really care about the pic anyway also God cards are my favorite ones 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueEyes22 Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 I don't care what the other people said about this but God cards are supposed to be OPED I also read the description but i didn't really care about the pic anyway also God cards are my favorite ones 10/10 true gods are meant to be OPed. But they do have to have a weakness. The wicked eraser and wicked avatar are good examples. for the wicked eraser if your opponent has only 2 cards on his field eraser's ATK is only 2000. And the wicked avatar could only have 100 ATK if the only other thing on the field was, say, an Ojama Yellow. Gods are powerful but they do have to have some kind of weakness, even if its incredibly hard. Also where did you get the name from? I like it but does it mean anything in particular? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redx555 Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 dont make me gaggggg!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 Erhm. Lets begin: 1) http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/The_Creator_God_of_Light,_HorakhtyALREADY EXISTS, NOOBZILLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 2) Looking at it, most people carry around 40 cards in their deck. So this card would only get 4000 ATK, something easy for its materials to do. 3) Your effect sucks. Period. 4) Your first picture is a picture of Ra's sheet after Obelisk pissed on it and Slifer is emerging from a swim in it. 5) Your second picture is a picture of the three sacred beasts, which already exist. 6) NOOBZILLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaroonX Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 "The ATK of this card is equal to the number of cards in your Deck, your side of the field, in your Graveyard, and your monsters Removed from play times 100. This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned." i once thought of that idea as well lol anyway let me say this in a polite 1 word sentences with british accent....................TOSTRONGREALLYBADnooffenseWHATKINDOFCARDISTHATNOTEVENTHECREWOFYUGIOHWILLMAKETHISCARD!!!!sorry if i said something wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee 1000 Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 the first is a 0/10 the second is about a 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueEyes22 Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 still needs lots of work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 owwwwwww!!!! my eyes!!!! they burrrrrn!!!!!! if you can destroy this forum, please do so. it will prevent anyone else to be tortured by this... thing!!!first card 0/10 second card 0/10!! they both suck horribly!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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