1000 post celebration

[Squirrel Girl]

Yay finally 1000 posts.

 

My 1000 post celebration card:

 

 

 

Lore:

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Summoned, all face-up Attack Position are changed to face-down Defence Position. When this card battles a face-down monster, destroy that card without flipping it face-up and destroy that card. When this card battles a monster in Defense Position, destroy that card and inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monsters Level x 300.

 

 

 

Rate and comment and help me with ocg fix and such

 

Image credit Jazin Kay

[T3RA PROWL3R]

Congrats on the posts.

 

I would've done "Shining Mecha Dragon" rather than "Shining Machine Dragon". It just sounds . . . 'childish' in a sense.

 

A bit of minor OCG errors.

"When this card is Summoned, all face-up Attack Position are changed to face-down Defence Position. When this card battles a face-down monster, destroy that card automatically with this card's effect. When this card destroys a Defense-Position monster, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the level of the destroyed monster x300."

 

Overall, 8.8/10

 

Hope that helps.

[ragnarok1945]

Defence should be Defense

 

neat burn effect, and the OCG correction is already up for you, which wasn't that big to begin with anyway, so I'll give you 9/10

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1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is SYNCHRO Summoned, all face-up Attack Position MONSTERS are changed to face-down Defence Position. When this card battles a face-down monster, YOU DO NOT APPLY THAT MONSTER'S EFFECT. When this card battles a monster in Defense Position, destroy that card and inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monsters Level x 300.

the cards not bad ive think the things i fixed( all caps) are correct ocg, but i think it is a little OP'ed, you might want to take the end effect on or apply a negitive effect to balance it, all on all 8/10

[Squirrel Girl]

It is a little OPed but synchros should be OPed. And your corrections are wrong. But thanks for comment and rate

[Hyenn]

They are not wrong, or atleast not all of them, you have to add monsters after attack/defense position, I think in yugioh they wite defense, but as fas as I know it is optional wether you write it with s or c in grammar. But at least make sure to write them only one way.

Also you wrote DESTROY that card without flipping it face-up and DESTROY that card (nostalgy?). So remove the second one. And the forlast word: monster's you forgot the ' of the possesive case but this is just some minor stuff. The important part of OCG is to add monsters where needed, and remoce the secong destroy that card text-part.

And as for the effect, it seems good to me, for a synchro it is certainly not OP, and it can be useful in an extra deck, (as swarmers like Blackwings have usually few DEF) and it's pretty good idea, too. Oh wait rahter this card is UP, cause it will switch your monster to DEF position, too! (if you meant that only your opponent then I am sure it was through oversight and you can correct it on your own)

[Squirrel Girl]

Thanks for commenting on this card but I have not time to read it sorry.

 

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[upsman1023]

Not bad the pics ok i think you could have done better be your 1000 card

I do like the effect the like the one girl said nice burn effect and the defense dose need to be

Defense but i have got that a lot so I don't have much room to talk butt!!

 

over all 9.5/10

[StevenBray]

OCG: "When this card battles a monster in Defense Position, destroy that card and inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monsters Level x 300." - you need to add "face-up" prior to the "Defence Position" in this effect otherwise its effect is uselss.

 

However the pic isn't my type, other than that OCG seems alright to me, effect seems balanced for a Synchro Monster, and the ATK, DEF and Level are all good.

 

Rating: 7/10 - Change the OCG and this card will be fine - its good, but not great.

 

And congrats on 1000.

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Defence should be Defense

 

Defence and Defense are both right, just the difference between British English and American English.

[T3RA PROWL3R]

Coming up is a little commenting and flaming on newer members. Well, most of them.

 

@ Ray_Yugi2: Any Synchro Monster can be Special Summoned ONLY after it has been Synchro Summoned, unless the card says "This card can only be Synchro Summoned." or "This card cannot be Special Summoned." This card doesn't need to be any more balanced than it is. It is OP'd like other Synchros and has a low burn effect.

 

@ AquaMaster: Were you talking about HIS correction or MY correction? Cuz I'm pretty sure mine is right. Otherwise Ragnarok would've fixed it better. Oh yeah, you should instead have "flip all face-up Attack-Position monsters on the field except this card into face-down Defense-Position." Unless you want this card down too.

 

@ Hyenn: You are an idiot. Learn to type and use periods. 'Defence' is NOT a word. Defense is tho. The important part of OCG is to get it right and to listen to people when they help (not refering to anybody). If it's a Synchro, it's OP'd. They all are. At least, they are supposed to be OP'd. This card HAS to be in the extra Deck. What do Blackwings have to do with this card? This card could destroy 1 monster at max w/out any support, and your opponent would prolly have 2 or 3 monsters that would be effected by this effect. They lose 1200 or 1500 Life Points, then they are all in face-up Attack-Position and this card is gone.

 

@ upsman: The quality of a card doesn't depend on how many posts you have. Nowadays, you see new members with 5 posts making really good cards, and veteran members with 6,500 posts making really bad cards. As for me? I'm somewhere in between fantastic and . . . Ah, hopeless. Wow. See, that is what I am talking about "Flaming the newer members". He thinks Ragnarok is a girl because his avatar is of Mai and Joey. Same as in his sig. Well, good luck to you on YCM.

 

There you go.

[Master White]

pfft...what is the big deal with 1000th post celebration anyway. Anyhow, i like the pic and effect seems good. Well, I give a 9.5/10 on your card and what would I have said has already been said. Good card.

[T3RA PROWL3R]

For some people, simple things like posts or number of cards are major milestones on their journey to top the ranks of YCM. I'ma gunna make a 500 post celebration card when I get there, but it won't be anything special.

[Squirrel Girl]

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[Hyenn]

@ Hyenn: You are an idiot. Learn to type and use periods.

Ok, I messed up the typing, you got that right. And periods, well I don't think that is that big problem that I do not use them, but next time I will do, if you think that not using them is that annoying.

'Defence' is NOT a word. Defense is tho.

LOL! I even had looked up in a dictionary to be sure before I posted and (look at dicfor.com), it undoubtly includes defence, it coud be wrong, but if I have to choose between a dictionary and a person I have to say I would go with the dictionary, anytime, try to check up on things before stating someone is stupid.

The important part of OCG is to get it right and to listen to people when they help (not refering to anybody).

Which in this case wold be the things I mentioned after that.

If it's a Synchro, it's OP'd.They all are. At least, they are supposed to be OP'd.

And you are calling me idiot? At least try to understand what I wrote and not just look at few words.

being balanced as a Synchro monster means that it doesn't stand out of the general level of Sychro monsters, aka if we say all Synchro is OP, then this card is OP, too.

This card HAS to be in the extra Deck.

I can't even say how meaningless this comment of you is: Just cause I wrote "in the extra deck" that doesn't imply that they could be put anywhere else, it only means that I also specified where it would go, nothing else.

What do Blackwings have to do with this card? This card could destroy 1 monster at max w/out any support, and your opponent would prolly have 2 or 3 monsters that would be effected by this effect. They lose 1200 or 1500 Life Points, then they are all in face-up Attack-Position and this card is gone.

Blackwings were just an example for an archetype that this card could be usefull against, or is giving example considired a form of stupidity now?

This card can have some use if your enemy runs a BW deck, for example he has Sirrocco, Shura, Bora (to go with the number 3 you mentioned before) this cards put them to def and with a few other monsters (you know synchro don't have to be the only card on your field...) you could destroy them far easier than normal, cause you don't have to fear Kalu't and you don't have to deal with their respective 2000, 1700, 1800 ATK but only with their about 1000 DEF, (1000, 800, 700 if I remember right)

Note: Try to read my post and actually understand it aswell, cause you don't seem to, of what I can see, and sorry for the bad typing, that is one thing you were right about, I do not always check my typing so sometimes it is a bit messed up, but it is far too rude to call me stupid for that.

And on what basic do you tell me to use periods, if for the same kind of text (my text would equal to your comment on my text) you don't use any either???

[Squirrel Girl]

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[PenguinZ]

congrats, anyway i'd give it a 8.9/10.

[Squirrel Girl]

Thanks

 

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[Susie]

Nice Job

9/10

 

EDIT:9/10 for putting "Destroy that card" down twice

[Squirrel Girl]

No i didn't do the pic, it is from Jazin Kays archive. And thanks for rate

 

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