Birth of the Hianorians (Machine Set) [6/≥40]

[Enma Kozato]

One day, on a distant planet, a living machine race was created. They were known as Hianorians, the living machines. These Hianorians held great power alone, but together their power is unimaginable

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[spoiler=Effect]"Hianorian - Battle Model I" + "Hianorian - Speed Model I"

This card can only be Fusion Summoned by the Spell Card "Machine DNA Convergence". This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for each Monster in your Graveyard with "Hianorian" in its name. If this is the only card on your side of the field, it can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. This card cannot attack your opponent directly.

 

[spoiler=Effect]Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to reveal one face-down Spell or Trap card on your opponents side of the field. Atcivate the following effect based on the card revealed.

Spell: Send the selected card to the graveyard and Draw 1 card.

Trap: Send the selected card to the graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the amount of Spell and Trap cards on the field x150.

 

 

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[ragnarok1945]

for the fusion, 50 atk/def is way too small given it has to be specific monsters

 

other than that though, all the effects are just fine the way they are, so I'll give the cards 9.1/10

[Enma Kozato]

typo on that, fixed it

[Enma Kozato]

added trap card

[ragnarok1945]

for the trap, I'm unsure if you want to put some restrictions on the summoned monster this way

 

other than that everything should be fine, so I'll give it 8.8/10

[Enma Kozato]

bump

[PenguinZ]

i'd give it a 9/10.

[Enma Kozato]

added card

[ragnarok1945]

for your Monarch Model F

 

before the Spell and Trap parts, you need to say "Activate the following effects based on the card revealed"

 

though from the effects they look fine

 

9.2/10