peanutthedog Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Well I decided to make some cards based around Adventure Quest, Dragonfable, etc.These are my first ever cards and I tried to keep my OCG as close to perfect as I could.Also some of these are probably OP and would never be legal xD Zorbak: Once per turn, during your main phase, if you control this card on your field, you can equip it to an "Adventure" monster as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, the monster's Attack Points are doubled, but it can not inflict any damage to your opponent's Life Points (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.)Twilly: Once per turn, during your main phase, if you control this card on your field, you can equip it to an "Adventure" monster as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, its attack points are halved and you can attack twice in the same Battle Phase with the equipped monster (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.) I realize this OCG is slightly off... Thanks and any opinions or critiques would be well appreciated :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 these cards are actually pretty good for a new memberOCG is almost spot onthe only problem is is that you are creating a new archetype, which im not saying is bad, but they should have something amongst each other that makes them unique (dark worlds-dsicard, gladiator beast-return to deck, etc) you are on the right track, though. keep up the good work8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alzeid Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Geez peanut, these came out better than I expected. :P More, more... I still say that Balancing City should have been "Both players can only inflict 1000 points of Battle Damage per turn." xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kittykatt Posted March 25, 2010 Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 cool i mean awsome!!!!! i like the cards :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peanutthedog Posted March 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2010 Thanks guys!Inferno: I was kind of going more for the Elemental Hero set where they each are separate but have spell and trap cards revolving around just their set. As I said I'm still trying to come up with more and I'll probably have to play Adventure Quest again to come up with more XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peanutthedog Posted March 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 Sorry for the double post, but I added two new monsters and a trap...Still looking for more ideas... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alzeid Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 I don't see anything too wrong with the three new ones. :o Mismatched Armor (god you look stupid... <_<) sounds like it's copied from somewhere though... [ 8/10 ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sákura Haruno Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Where is the guy with the sword that has skulls on it and skulls on the skulls and spikes on the skulls and on fire from the commercial? (my friend hates that commercial so i piss him off by saying it :)) i wanted to see him on there. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peanutthedog Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 Wait...Who? I haven't played the game much in awhile XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 there are some OCG errors again but this time i dont know how to re-word to make it more OCG savy, i hate when that happens... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peanutthedog Posted April 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 Yeah...I haven't really worked on this due to school work :(Hopefully tomorrow I'll get to work :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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