The Bobster Posted March 26, 2010 Report Share Posted March 26, 2010 [align=center]Hey! This is my new set, Underworld Attack! I made this to celebrate me making three stars.Tell me what you think and what I can do to improve![/align] [align=center][spoiler=Cards][spoiler=EN001]EffectThis card can be Special Summoned from your Deck if you have 3 DARK monsters on your field. If you do, this card is treated as a Level four monster with 1700 ATK and DEF. When this card is Tribute Summoned succesfully, it's attribute is also treated as LIGHT. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can discard 1 DARK monster from your hand to return it to your Deck. [spoiler=EN002]Effect:If this card is Special Summoned from your Deck or Graveyard by card effect, destroy 2 monsters on your opponents side of the field. [spoiler=EN003]Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if you control 1 "Obiki - Prince of Underworld". When this card is Special Summoned, you can return up to 3 monsters with "Underworld" in their name from your Graveyard to your Deck. For every DARK monster in your graveyard, this card gains 500 ATK and DEF. [spoiler=EN004]Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if you have 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, designate 2 DARK monsters in your Graveyard. Return those to your Deck. [spoiler=EN005]Effect:When this card is Normal Summoned, discard 1 card. If you do, if this card is returned to your Deck from your graveyard, you can Special Summon 2 Level 4 monsters with "Underworld" in their name from your Deck. [spoiler=EN006]Effect:When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, you can look at the top of your Deck. If that card has "Underworld" in its name, you can Special Summon it. [spoiler=EN007]Effect:If this card is Special Summoned from your Deck or Graveyard by the effect of a card with "Underworld" in its name, this card gains the following effect.* This card cannot be destroyed by battle with a non-DARK monster. [spoiler=EN008]Effect:If this card attacks a monster with a higher ATK than this card, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the attack of your opponents monster and destroy it. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 damn, I thought it would be vampire warriors like from the Underworld films four star should be Level 4 Nejec's effect is too bland, it needs another one DARK attribute should be DARK graveyard should be Graveyard Meshdasu's effect is OPed, put restrictions on the summoned monsters 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Bobster Posted March 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 Thank you for the suggestions. Revised EDIT: Added 7th card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Bobster Posted March 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 El Bump Added 8th card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Kyousan's effect is boring, it needs another one though the 7th and 8th OCG both look good, so those updates I'll give them 8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Bobster Posted March 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 Thank you for the review! Revised. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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