TTR~ Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 this is pretty much the strongest "Black World" monster (maybe if you want more)if you like the idea, tell me I tried to even out the effect by giving him low ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 everything is cool, except the effect is lame Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TTR~ Posted March 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 everything is cool' date=' except the effect is lame[/quote']thank you, i'm making a set now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 Evening out the effect has nothing to do with its ATK. 2550 is still a bit high. The pic is overused. "Black World" isn't an archtype. Maybe "Dark World"? [spoiler=If I am correct]Effect is horrible and worthless. Try:"When this card is discarded from your hand, you can Special Summon it. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 1 Set Spell or Trap Card on the field." Now, Dark World monsters aren't treated as Zombie-Type or LIGHT monsters. Nor have they anything to do with Synchros. Their DEF also isn't higher than their ATK. "Brron, Mad King of Dark World" has 1800 ATK and only 400 DEF. [spoiler=If I am incorrect]OCG is off."This card is also treated as a Zombie-Type and LIGHT monster. This card cannot be destroyed by Synchro monsters." Needs another effect besides "This card cannot be destroyed by Synchro monsters." Try coming up with something on your own (hopefully something original), and then I, along with the other members of YCM, will guide this card to perfection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TTR~ Posted March 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 Evening out the effect has nothing to do with its ATK. 2550 is still a bit high. The pic is overused. "Black World" isn't an archtype. Maybe "Dark World"? [spoiler=If I am correct]Effect is horrible and worthless. Try:"When this card is discarded from your hand' date=' you can Special Summon it. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 1 Set Spell or Trap Card on the field." Now, Dark World monsters aren't treated as Zombie-Type or LIGHT monsters. Nor have they anything to do with Synchros. Their DEF also isn't higher than their ATK. "Brron, Mad King of Dark World" has 1800 ATK and only 400 DEF. [spoiler=If I am incorrect']OCG is off."This card is also treated as a Zombie-Type and LIGHT monster. This card cannot be destroyed by Synchro monsters." Needs another effect besides "This card cannot be destroyed by Synchro monsters." Try coming up with something on your own (hopefully something original), and then I, along with the other members of YCM, will guide this card to perfection. i'm not going for a dark world archetype Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 OCG FIX;"This card is also treated as an Light Zombie-type monster. This card cannot be destroyed by Synchro monsters." That should do it. I think. I've seen cards that have the attribute before the type like how I have it, and so that is what I think it should say, but don't quote me on it. Also, the ATK/DEF is way to high, you need to lower it. maybe try 2000 ATK and 2500 DEf. I hope that helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 OCG FIX;"This card is also treated as an Light Zombie-type monster. This card cannot be destroyed by Synchro monsters." That should do it. I think. I've seen cards that have the attribute before the type like how I have it' date=' and so that is what I think it should say, but don't quote me on it. [/quote']I believe my way of teh OCG is correct. Because maybe, he would want a LIGHT Fiend, or a DARK Zombie. i'm not going for a dark world archetypeOh, well you never said that. But still, I would somewhat enjoy seeing a set based off of this card. Just try to use original pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 27, 2010 Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 Zombie-type should be Zombie-Type LIGHT attribute should be LIGHT effect is too boring, but then again you're new so it's ok. I'll give this 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TTR~ Posted March 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2010 OCG FIX;"This card is also treated as an Light Zombie-type monster. This card cannot be destroyed by Synchro monsters." That should do it. I think. I've seen cards that have the attribute before the type like how I have it' date=' and so that is what I think it should say, but don't quote me on it. [/quote']I believe my way of teh OCG is correct. Because maybe, he would want a LIGHT Fiend, or a DARK Zombie. i'm not going for a dark world archetypeOh' date=' well you never said that. But still, I would somewhat enjoy seeing a set based off of this card. Just try to use original pics.[/quote'] well i'm making one right now "You know what, who cares? I'm making a set!" is it's title Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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