Another attempt at making a good card

[philfresz]

 

Effect

 

When your opponent attacks this card,you Special Summon 2 monsters with 1500 or less ATK from your hand. During your opponents End Phase, monsters that were Special Summoned by this effect return to your hand. When there is no spell or trap cards on your side of the field,this card Gains 500 ATK and DEF for every monster on your side of the field.

 

NOTE

I did not make the image of the monster

[Kitty]

When your opponent attacks this card,you Special Summon 2 monsters with 1500 or less ATK from your hand. During your opponents End Phase, monsters that were Special Summoned by this effect return to your hand. When there is no Spell or Trap cards on your side of the field, this card gains 500 ATK and DEF for every monster on your side of the field.

 

Not bad.

 

It does seem alittle Overpowered though.

 

Other than that it's a nice card.

 

8/10

[Icy God]

I found one error, Trap and Spell need to be in CaPS.

[T3RA PROWL3R]

Card is OP'd. It should be "The Special Summoned monsters are destroyed during the End Phase."

 

When your opponent attacks this card should be When this card is selected as an Attack target.

[jack781217]

9/10

This card looks balanced, since its effect activates only during your opponent's Battle Phase. Your opponent still get to re-choose the attack target after this effect is activated, so this card's effect is kind of hard to use well, I think. Probably good to combo it with Spiritual Art or something else that Tributes monster as a cost.

[philfresz]

Thanks guys I appreciate the comments and ratings :)

[Adogadog8]

I like this card, although you should correct it with what they're saying up there :/ It's a good card though. Very balanced with a simple useful effect if you have a couple monsters with 1500 or lower ATK in your hand.

9/10

[philfresz]

 

When this card is selected as an Attack target,you can Special Summon 2 monsters with 1500 or less ATK from your hand. During your opponents End Phase, monsters that were Special Summoned by this effect return to your hand.If you control no Spell or Trap cards,this card Gains 500 ATK and DEF for every monster on your side of the field.

 

I've corrected The OCG errors

[ragnarok1945]

only the 2 special summoned monster effect is OPed

 

yes it's only for 1 turn they're on the field, but even that they need restrictions

 

8/10

[Guest JoshIcy]

only the 2 special summoned monster effect is OPed

 

yes it's only for 1 turn they're on the field' date=' but even that they need restrictions

 

8/10

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Losing such drastic hand advantage is overpowered? *scratches head* Do you know to play the game? And you can't even make use of them? >>" get off the white pony and learn.

[ragnarok1945]

you can still use them for tribute and sycnrho summonings

[Guest JoshIcy]

you can still use them for tribute and sycnrho summonings

 

Since when can you do that during your opponents turn? *looks in the rule book* Only one card allows you to get even close to that and it's limited. Please tell me how what you said makes sense.

[jack781217]

you can still use them for tribute and sycnrho summonings

not without the help of Spell/Trap/Monster Effects that are Spell Speed 2 or higher (such as Urgent Tuning)

[-Griffin]

...And who on earth is going to do something that situational?

It's a weak monster that you'd have to put in Attack Position to offer your opponent more targets to take advantage from you. Don't see where this would be run.

[philfresz]

...And who on earth is going to do something that situational?

It's a weak monster that you'd have to put in Attack Position to offer your opponent more targets to take advantage from you. Don't see where this would be run.

Well its supposed to go with another card made