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Ok i hope ive posted this right, im new to this =/

 

K here's my card (I hope)

 

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U may not be able to read description so here it is:

This card's attribute(s) and type is determined by the tribute's attribute(s):

Dark: This card is a Dark attribute and a fiend.

Light: This card is a Light attribute and a fairy.

The tributes for this card MUST be light or dark, if both it gains both attributes. This card also gains effects relative to the type of tributes (both are also applied for both attributes).

Light: Remove from play a card from your deck and graveyard, destroy a card on your opponent’s field and draw a card.

Dark: Once per turn at anytime you may remove from play one card from your deck and your graveyard to prevent the destruction of a card on the field.

 

Yeah its long, hope u like the card any tips to shorted and if u think its even vaguly realistic would be appriciated

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For this being your first card, its quite good. Yes, there are heavy OCG errors, but thats why we're here :)

 

[spoiler=Before]This card's attribute(s) and type is determined by the tribute's attribute(s):

Dark: This card is a Dark attribute and a fiend.

Light: This card is a Light attribute and a fairy.

The tributes for this card MUST be light or dark, if both it gains both attributes. This card also gains effects relative to the type of tributes (both are also applied for both attributes).

Light: Remove from play a card from your deck and graveyard, destroy a card on your opponent’s field and draw a card.

Dark: Once per turn at anytime you may remove from play one card from your deck and your graveyard to prevent the destruction of a card on the field.

 

 

[spoiler=After]

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Tribute Summoned by tributing LIGHT or DARK monsters. This card gains the following effects based on the attributes of the tributed monsters:

- LIGHT: This card is treated as a LIGHT Fairy-type monster. Once per turn, you can remove from play the top card of your deck and 1 card from your Graveyard to destroy one monster your opponent controls. Then draw 1 card.

- DARK: This card is treated as a DARK Fiend-type monster. Once per turn, you can remove from play the top card of your deck and 1 card from your graveyard to negate the destruction of one card you control.

 

 

 

Also, I'd make it a level 7 or 8, instead of 9.

All-in-all, though, really good. Especially for your first card.

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