trashcan246 Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Plz rate and comment plz this my thrid card.:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Picture is badConfusing Effectalot OCG errors, 3.39/10Sorry dude, I told you I was gonna be fair Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 You think that's fair? I speak broken english as a language >_> and I can't make sense of the effect. Please clear that up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy God Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 "When this monster is with another monster on your side of the field..." it could be changed too: "If there are no other monsters on your side of the field..." ~There needs to be a space before the ".And""spell" and "trap" should be "Spell" and "Trap" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 He would of done better if he added CAPS. And hey Icyblue, have not heard from you EVER :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Code~Red Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 OCG errors, hard to understand effect. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 He would of done better if he added CAPS. And hey Icyblue' date=' have not heard from you EVER :D[/quote'] Personal Problems. I stay away from the board mostly to prevent me from insulting anyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Sorry Trash, but this is good, you will learn from this.He would of done better if he added CAPS. And hey Icyblue' date=' have not heard from you EVER :D[/quote'] Personal Problems. I stay away from the board mostly to prevent me from insulting anyone. Oh, that is smart (That looks sarcastic but I am not trying to be)Sorry Trash' date=' but this is good, you will learn from this.[hr']He would of done better if he added CAPS. And hey Icyblue' date=' have not heard from you EVER :D[/quote'] Personal Problems. I stay away from the board mostly to prevent me from insulting anyone. Oh, that is smart (That looks sarcastic but I am not trying to be) I am getting off topic, sorry. Trash, to make the pic better, left click the pic, then right clik it, then go to properties, then copy and paster the ADREsS URL, ok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Well, I wouldn't go call him trash...Well, I would, but not like this. It appears you keep coming back to his topic to flame him. Don't do it. If you're going to, do it like me: Post one, really long post burning him to ashes and just never pay attention to it again. The reason I'm not doing that here is that I see that you said this is your third card, and I'm in a good mood. 1) The OCG is confusing, and wrong, but I get what you're saying:"As long as you control this monster, you cannot activate any traps or spells. Select 1 monster you control. Half this card's ATK and DEF and increase the selected monster's ATK and DEF by the amount decreased." 2) Good effect, although I'd limit it to something like you can only activate 1 spell or trap card per turn, rather than completely disabling them. And I'd make the card a lvl 4 and put something in there about not being able to summon it unless you control at least 1 other monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 No his name is Trashcan, so I am nicknaming him Trash. Plus I know em in real, so he does not mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 ^-^ My bad then. But at least you got some flaming tips out of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 It is ok, not your fault, I would of done the same :P And, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 spell or trap card should be Spell or Trap Card effect is confusing it reminds me a little bit of the card Ryoku, is that the effect you were trying to get at? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aussj4link Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 It looks like what your saying is that this card is a 1 tribute 2k/2500 with an effect that gives another monster on your side of the field half its own attack but you can't activate spells and traps, if you ask me that's really underpowered and just harmful to have in any deck. I honestly never really care about OCG but apparently its really important here, but what I do care about is clarity of the effect and its usefulness. This card I couldn't see a use for, you couldn't skill drain it for much of a purpose and there are a lot better tributes and even non-tributes. I'm still pretty much a noob but off the top of my head I couldn't see a use for this card, 2/10 If say it had an effect of limiting your opponent to one action per turn or something like that maybe it would be useful even with the downsides of using it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trashcan246 Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 willl i read all the stuff thanks for ppl that gave me a 5 plus and thanks kato_ i will make them better thanks4 the tipz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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