TTR~ Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 thank you, every one at deviantartFiend's Lore:This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Mechanical Juggernaut Dragon". This card can't attack the turn it was summoned. You may discard 1 card to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. As long as this card is face-up on the field, you take no damage from battles involving "Mechanical" monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peanutthedog Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Angler looks good.Bounty Hunter needs to say unaffected I believe not immune (Might just be me)Humanoid should say their not a XDDragon: Summoned needs to have a capital S, and you say "If there is a Field Spell Card on the field when this monster is Summoned, destroy it" and when I read that I was confused of whether you meant the dragon or the Field Spell...Fiend: I would write out can not because it's slightly more formal :DI like them and I really like the Dragon's pic 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TTR~ Posted March 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 bumpBUMP BUMPBUMPBUMPBUMPBUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peanutthedog Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 He's called Creator but he adds ATK...Okie dokie broski XDMaybe throw points and a period at the end :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TTR~ Posted March 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 BUMp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 first 3 card effects a little too bland same with Wicked Mechanical Creator, too boring of an effect if you just give them each another effect, you'll be good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TTR~ Posted March 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 first 3 card effects a little too bland same with Wicked Mechanical Creator' date=' too boring of an effect if you just give them each another effect, you'll be good 8/10[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 it's an improvement, now what about the other 3? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TTR~ Posted March 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 it's an improvement' date=' now what about the other 3?[/quote'] well, i don't want to go into the pioneer zone, so i'll leave them be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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