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[Shadow Soul]

[tetsuiga101]

Spelling errors like "Deaths Pet" should be "Death's Pet". Use more proper terms for the game. Say "and" instead of "plus", "When your opponent declares an attack...", "Summon "Death's Pet" after sacrificing any number of monsters with a combined total of 8 (Or more) Stars..." There's more too, just think about what effects would normally say

[orangketan]

-Major and Minor OCG errors

-some Spelling errors

-Ritual monsters do not have a description if it have an effect

-The Last card is OP'ed way too OP'ed

-You should use the term "Increase and Decrease" instead of "gain and loose"

-You need some practice making cards with good OCG

sorry... [2/10]

[A.Prime]

-Major and Minor OCG errors

-some Spelling errors

-Ritual monsters do not have a description if it have an effect

-The Last card is OP'ed way too OP'ed

-You should use the term "Increase and Decrease" instead of "gain and loose"

-You need some practice making cards with good OCG

sorry... [2/10]

 

I agree

and for the 1st card the sub-Type must be Sea-Beast!!

[Brimtosis]

These cards are flawed. I'm suprised that I'm the only one pointing out that the names should not be pure caps, but with a cap at the beggining of the word.

Such epicness is a new for me.

Sorry, but it's a 2.5/10

[Susie]

CAPS LOCK ON ALL OF THE TITLES

OCG errors

The land drowning tidal wave isa bit OPed

4/10