Rigonoko Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Just thought of it... critique please... Photo courtesy of moddb.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Either change to a trap or a quick play Spell cause that'd never work, Image has a Black Border I think it's OP'd but that's just me 7/10 good job for a new member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Take the border of the pic and change it to a Trap Card or Quick Play Spell Card. OCG: Active only when your opponent declares an attack. Remove from play all cards on both players field. Both players then Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from their Graveyard in face-up Defense Position. It's not perfect but it seems better than what you have... This card is alright for a new member so I'll give it a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy God Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 All you need to do is capitalize "Graveyard" and "Defense Position" and "Level".It also fits better as a Trap Card.Very nice picture though. Just work on OCG and you'll do fine as a Card Maker. 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted March 28, 2010 Report Share Posted March 28, 2010 Normal Spell Cards can't be activated during your opponent's turn. Try Quick-Play Spell instead. In the sentence "Destroy and remove from play", "Destroy and" isn't needed. Because some cards' effects activate when they are destroyed. I would also change it to "Remove from play all face-up monsters on the field. [spoiler=So, my version of the effect]Activate only when your opponent declares an attack. Negate the attack and remove from play all face-up monsters and destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on the field. Each player can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster in face-up Defense-Position. This card is removed from play when it is sent to the Graveyard. This card would work well with D.D. Survivor, D.D. Scout Plane, etc.. Even if you had Rare Metal Dragon in your Graveyard at the time, because it would probably be your turn soon after you use this card, then you got a 2400 ATK beatstick. 9/10. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 29, 2010 Report Share Posted March 29, 2010 some capitalization errors this seems better suited as a quickplay spell card instead should work out quite well for DD decks, so I'll give this 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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