Five Fiend Cards That Would Appreciate Your Comments... Perhaps my last set here at YCM

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I have decided to take a break from my Alphabet Monsters, so... Here we go.

 

[spoiler= First Monster - Darkheart Insane Jester]

Lore:

Once per turn, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card for every "Darkheart" monster Summoned during that turn. If a "Darkheart" monster you control would be destroyed while you control a Level 8 or higher "Darkheart" monster, you can destroy this card instead.

 

[spoiler= Second Monster - Darkheart Insane Duke]

Lore:

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 1 "Darkheart - Insane Jester" you control. Once per turn, if you Summon a "Darkheart" monster, you can destroy 1 monster your opponent controls whose Level is lower than the Level of this card. If this card is destroyed by battle, destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on the field.

 

[spoiler= Darkheart - Warrior Lady]

Lore:

If this monster has the highest Level of all monsters you control, it can attack twice during the same Battle Phase, and no other monster you control can be selected the target of an attack. Once per turn, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200 for every Level 3 or lower monster destroyed that turn until the End Phase.

 

 

For those of you who like making stories, the effects kinda tell part of the story between these two characters, the Jester and Warrior Lady.[/align]

[Gogeta™]

This card is insane awesome. Great effect not to OP'ed and the pic is great. Its too bad YCM doesn't have justified text alignment though, it would just make the card look even better.

 

Overall I'd give this a 9.8/10

[jayjack]

Not bad, can't see any flaws to this number

9.5/10 nice job

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Thanks, you two. ;J

Lookie there, the Jester got promoted.

[Gawd of Spell]

I was working on an Alphabet set until you stole my idea

now i hav to delete all 43 cards GOSH i hate u

hmm.... nice idea tho

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Hehe, thanks!

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I think you all are intentionally doing this...

 

What did I do? You cruel souls... >.<

[Jazin Kay]

Cruelty is subjective.

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*Sniffle*

Guess so. Time to get back on meh feet. No rating in that post? How Cr-unexpected of you.

[Jazin Kay]

I was waiting for someone to do good with these, so I technically automatically approve.

 

Though I think HP Doom cropped this a little better than I did when he found it.

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I haven't checked his. I'll look and see, though I pretty much have converted to Jazinism with my card images.

[Guest Neo Fusion]

every=each

great cards

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Thanks!

[Inferno I20]

see i was wondering like where the abc's were...

boredom can get to all of us :P

pretty interesting concept, will there be more Darkheart's? or did you do this out of boredom?

i seriously dont understand how do you get so many people to see your cards XD

maybe its something your born with lol

 

overall-9/10

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I'll be doing more Darkhearts. They're for a fan-fic character, though I intend to duel with them in real life. Please, everyone, keep me in check for overpoweredness; fan-fictions should have awesome duels, but realistic ones nonetheless.

 

Amazing signature as usual, Inferno.

[Inferno I20]

how do you duel them in real life? if you make a fan fic you can use my archetype XD

my sig hasnt changed :/

lol thanks though :D

oh for "Insane Duke" you should say destroy 1 "face-up" monster, just to clarify it, it might not make a difference but who knows

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Another image added!

[Inferno I20]

hey i have that picture already! lol

Darheart-Warrior Lady has a pretty interesting effect, her second effect is kinda useless though, because you can only do it once per turn, so maximum you can get is 200, but i you meant it another way then you wouldnt need to say once per turn, confused?

9.5/10

still great

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The last effect makes sense, I think...

 

It gains 200 ATK and DEF until the End Phase for every Level 3 or lower destroyed, so if your opponent plays a trap that destroys, say, two LV3 or lower, it gains 400 ATK. Then you destroy 2 LV 3 with other monsters you control, giving it another 400. The gain isn't supposed to be huge, but it helps, and it keeps true to the relationship between her and the Jester.

[Inferno I20]

well yeah i didnt compare her with the others, i forgot to do that

but to me i think her ability is slightly weak, since if your opponent really had a card that could destroy more than 1 monster (this is hypothetically speaking if you didnt have Insane Jester) than obviously your opponent would kill Warrior Lady instead of level 3 or lower monsters, or your opponent can just destroy every monster on the field...

i dont know...thats how i thought about it

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You're right. Unless you have an lv8 monster, it is pretty weak... D:

[Inferno I20]

yup:D

[ragnarok1945]

for Insane Duke, it shouldn't be Normal Summoned since its level is higher than 4. You should have said Tribute Summoned (at the beginning of the text)

 

but other than that though, all the other OCG is just fine

 

nor do I see anything imbalanced in the effects

 

9.4/10

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Whoot, April first fake leaving was a lucky bump.

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Bump.