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I only played Yu-Gi-Oh! on my PSP and PC and watched the Animes (except the last one 5D) so u can say that I never played it really or even touched a real card but still I love it.

anyway here is my very first card, it just came to my mind and well I made it (after reading most of the guides and rules here).

 

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First OCG:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned. You can only Special Summon this card by Tributing 3 Level 5 or higher DARK Attribute monsters.This Card cannot be destroyed in battle or affected by Spells,Traps or effects of effect monsters. The ATK and DEF becomes equal to the number of DARK monsters in either graveyard 500. If your Life Point is higher than 500 remove it from play after Battle Phase.If your Life Point is lower than 100 you can discard any number of Card from your Deck to increase your life points by 100. If you do, remove this card from play..
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Thanks to josh = jaden and Parion555 for their help with OCG and ~Evergreen~ for the Tips

Thanks to josh = jaden and Parion555 for their help with OCG and ~Evergreen~

You can only Special Summon this card by Tributing 3 Level 5 or higher DARK Attribute monsters. This Card cannot be destroyed in battle and it isn't affected by Spell, Trap or Monster Card Effects. When this card is Summoned, it's ATK and DEF become equal to the number of DARK Attribute Monsters in your opponent's Deck X500 and number of DARK Attribute Monsters in both player's Graveyards X200. If your Life Points are higher than 500, this monster remove this card from play after the Battle Phase. If your Life Points are below 100 you can send any number of Cards from your Deck to the Graveyard and gain 100 Life Points for each Card sent to the Graveyard by this effect. If you activate this effect, remove this card from play.

You can only Special Summon this card by Tributing 3 Level 5 or higher DARK Attribute monsters. This Card cannot be destroyed in battle and it isn't affected by Spell, Trap or Monster Card Effects. When this card is Summoned, it's ATK and DEF become equal to the number of DARK Attribute Monsters in your opponent's Deck X500 and number of DARK Attribute Monsters in both player's Graveyards X200. If your Life Points are higher than 500, this monster remove this card from play after the Battle Phase. If your Life Points are below 100 you can send any number of Cards from your Deck to the Graveyard and gain 100 Life Points for each Card sent to the Graveyard by this effect. If you activate this effect, remove this card from play.

 

Note:Image is Dahaka From Prince of Persia

 

tried my best to maintain balance but don't know if I could really do it or not cz24.gif

since depend on how u play, this card might get really powerful or just useful in a pinch for dark attribute users (if u can summon it that is)

in the end all comments will be appreciated just have mercy cz53.gif

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josh = jaden Newbie

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the ocg is a bit sketchy mate and im not sure weather this belongs in a realistic card thread, you dont really get level 12 divine beasts, i think i just about understand the effect but its poorly written , but for your first card i'd give you 6.5/10

 

as a tip , try not to use pics from games or films !

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Parion555 Newbie

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Just a few OCG errors i will fix it just so you know how it should have been:

 

You can only Special Summon this card by Tributing 3 Level 5 or higher DARK Attribute monsters. This Card cannot be destroyed in battle and it isn't affected by Spell, Trap or Monster Card Effects. When this card is Summoned, it's ATK and DEF become equal to the number of DARK Attribute Monsters in your opponent's Deck X500 and number of DARK Attribute Monsters in both player's Graveyards X200. If your Life Points are higher than 500, this monster remove this card from play after the Battle Phase. If your Life Points are below 100 you can send any number of Cards from your Deck to the Graveyard and gain 100 Life Points for each Card sent to the Graveyard by this effect. If you activate this effect, remove this card from play.

 

Other than the OCG,this card looks fairly balanced,the only thing that i see overpowered is that it isn't affected by effects.So i have to give it a 9/10.

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ocg help for you ...

 

You can only Special Summon this card by Tributing 3 Level 5 or higher DARK Attribute monsters.This Card CAN NOT BE DESTROYED AS A RESULT OF BATTLE AND IS IMMUNE TO SPELL< TRAP AND MONSTER CARD EFFECTS.WHEN this Card IS Special Summoned THE ATK and DEF of THIS CARD IS DETERMINED BY THE NUMBER OF DARK ATTRIBUTE MONSTERS IN YOUR OPPONENTS DECK X500 AND THE NUMBER OF DARK ATTRIBUTE MONSTERS IN BOTH PLAYERS GRAVEYARDS X200 . IF YOU HAVE 500 OR MORE LIFE POINTS this monster is removed from play after Battle Phase.IF YOU HAVE 100 OR LESS Life Points, BY REMOVING THIS CARD FROM PLAY you MAY discard any number of Cards from your Deck and gain 100 Life Points for each Card.

 

the Capital bit are wat ive edited , hope this helps ;)

 

(edit) ooops ... bit late :)

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darkwings Newbie

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ocg help for you ...

 

You can only Special Summon this card by Tributing 3 Level 5 or higher DARK Attribute monsters.This Card CAN NOT BE DESTROYED AS A RESULT OF BATTLE AND IS IMMUNE TO SPELL< TRAP AND MONSTER CARD EFFECTS.WHEN this Card IS Special Summoned THE ATK and DEF of THIS CARD IS DETERMINED BY THE NUMBER OF DARK ATTRIBUTE MONSTERS IN YOUR OPPONENTS DECK X500 AND THE NUMBER OF DARK ATTRIBUTE MONSTERS IN BOTH PLAYERS GRAVEYARDS X200 . IF YOU HAVE 500 OR MORE LIFE POINTS this monster is removed from play after Battle Phase.IF YOU HAVE 100 OR LESS Life Points' date=' BY REMOVING THIS CARD FROM PLAY you MAY discard any number of Cards from your Deck and gain 100 Life Points for each Card.

 

the Capital bit are wat ive edited , hope this helps ;)

 

(edit) ooops ... bit late :)

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still no familiar with rep system around this forum ,so I just added your name and thanked u for the help on first post : )

if only I had PS in office I would have edited the image as well

tanks again for all the help, learned quite a lot here ^^

 

Edit: Reped : )

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darkwings Newbie

darkwings

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just say DARK monsters' date=' not DARK attribute

 

what's with all the capitalized letters in the text?

 

gaining only atk if against a DARK deck, you should have given it another way to give it atk power

 

5/10

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I don't know that dude fixed the OCG for me so I put it like that , the first one that I wrote myself didn't have this capitalization.

 

as for power, didn't want to make so much OPed so I decided to go for one attribute . any way ,thanks for comment and rate appreciate it.

will work more on it

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned. You can only Special Summon this card by Tributing 3 Level 5 or higher DARK Attribute monsters.This Card cannot be destroyed in battle or affected by Spells,Traps or effects of effect monsters. The ATK and DEF becomes equal to the number of DARK monsters in either graveyard 500. If your Life Point is higher than 500 remove it from play after Battle Phase.If your Life Point is lower than 100 you can discard any number of Card from your Deck to increase your life points by 100. If you do, remove this card from play.

 

that's is the OCG fix

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