.:Shaymin:. Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 [align=center]Well its been a while since I took a break from card making. Well I have decided to make a come back card. Here you go When this card destroys an opponent's WIND monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, draw 2 cards. If the card drawn is a Level 4 or lower DARK monster, you can show it to your opponent to Special Summon it to your field. Please do not SPAM Here.If you see an OCG errors and say their is OCG Errors and don't sate them I will neg you You Have Been Warned[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kuriboh fan Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 I personally think it's great, but i happen to be easy to impress. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Effect is diefferent, but a little boring, nice pic, Name is uncreative, but it is a character, so it does not have to be :P It feels like someting is missing, but I do not know what, I give it a 8.9/10 (Btw, I do not know if you notice, but a month or two back, I was the person who poster Biker Yoshi in the Thread "My fiest card, remember me?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Effect is diefferent' date=' but a little boring, nice pic, Name is uncreative, but it is a character, so it does not have to be :P It feels like someting is missing, but I do not know what, I give it a 8.9/10 (Btw, I do not know if you notice, but a month or two back, I was the person who poster Biker Yoshi in the Thread "My fiest card, remember me?"[/quote'] Oh Ya Now I remember I have seen your recent cards and they look great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ranmer Aralin Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 well there is no Shame in trying it looks okay i would at least give it a 6/10 maybe even a 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rate405 Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Ty, I know for sure I have REALY improved, especially my recent card, The Plant Thief (Yeah, I know I got off Topic, I do that alot)well there is no Shame in trying it looks okay i would at least give it a 6/10 maybe even a 7/10. Wait, why such a low rate? Any specific reason? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 Thank you all for not SPAMMING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 The pick needs a BG but not that badNo OCG errors as far as I seeSimple effects are simpleKind of creative though9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted March 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 The pick needs a BG but not that badNo OCG errors as far as I seeSimple effects are simpleKind of creative though9.1/10 Actually their is a background just look closely Also ty for not SPAMMING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 The pick needs a BG but not that badNo OCG errors as far as I seeSimple effects are simpleKind of creative though9.1/10 Actually their is a background just look closely Also ty for not SPAMMINGTo me it looks like alot of squaresIf it is a BG it could be better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted March 30, 2010 Report Share Posted March 30, 2010 If the card drawn=If 1 of the cards drawnur not that rusty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 Its simple, but effective, and I can't see any OCG errors on my part.I find it funny how its the speed form and has a high DEF stat :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 very good .:Shaymin:....Realy good job!!I like it!! I'm not sure...but I think I find a minor OCG error...DARK, WIND, LIGHT ect monsters should be DARK, WIND, LIGHT ect Monsters?? 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 very good .:Shaymin:....Realy good job!!I like it!! I'm not sure...but I think I find a minor OCG error...DARK' date=' WIND, LIGHT ect monsters should be DARK, WIND, LIGHT ect Monsters?? 9/10[/quote'] no monsters is lower-case thx for the rate anyways Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 its a pretty interesting effectpretty useless though if you are not battling a WIND type deck.may i suggest changing it so that its effect goes something like-"when this destroys a non-DARK monster as a result of battle, draw 1 card."since he supports DARK types that would make more sense. also you should create the other forms of Deoxys so that they can only be Special Summoned by having the normal Deoxys on your field or something. if you want to know how that would work ill help you EDIT-damn i forgot to rate again :P8.5/10-for the random WIND thing+the second effect is interesting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kuriboh fan Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 i think shaymin chose wind because rayquaza deoxys' enemy is in this case a wind-type monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 *facepalm*well cards shouldnt really be designed to kill one another, EXCEPT the Allies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 THX for the rates and not spamming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 THX for the rates and not spammingwhy do you keep saying that?im just very curious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted March 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 THX for the rates and not spammingwhy do you keep saying that?im just very curious I will do anything for a post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted March 31, 2010 Report Share Posted March 31, 2010 i would do that too but no one and i mean no one says anything on my post and i have about 35 more cards on a single topic :(stupid...god... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted April 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted April 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 Shay Shay sayz BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest miura II Posted April 14, 2010 Report Share Posted April 14, 2010 Good card, I don't see any OCG errors. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 That card is extremly awesome you should be proud 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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