Crystal Warrior LV3/6 + Overgrown ~ Check em' out

[ProSora]

[align=center]Flying Crystal Bear LV3

WIND/Beast-Warrior-Type/ATK1200/DEF800

 

 

Lore:

Once per turn when this card enters a battle you can discard 1 card to have this card gain 300 ATK Points until the End Phase. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster as a result of battle, send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Flying Crystal Bear LV6" from your hand or Deck.

 

Flying Crystal Bear LV6

WIND/Beast-Warrior-Type/ATK2200/DEF2000

 

 

Lore:

If this card is Summoned by the effect of "Flying Crystal Bear LV3" you can destroy up to 1 card on the field. Once per turn when this card enters a battle you can discard 1 card to have this card gain 400 ATK Points until the End Phase. While this card is face-up on the field no Trap Cards can be activated during the Battle Phase.

 

 

Overgrown Crystal Warrior

WIND/Warrior-Type/ATK2800/DEF2800

 

 

Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up "Flying Crystal Bear LV6" you control and by discarding 3 cards. This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. Once per turn when this card enters a battle with a monster your opponent controls you can increase this card's ATK Points by this Level of the attacking monster x100 until the End Phase.[/align]

[T3RA PROWL3R]

Props for making them in JAP.

 

I don't really like the names (Flying Crystal Bear? How cheasy can you get?) You could just do "Crystal Bear" instead of how you have them now.

 

[spoiler=Flying Crystal Bear LV3]Once per turn when this card battles, you can discard 1 card(From Where?) to have this face-up card gain 300 ATK until the End Phase. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster as a result of battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Flying Crystal Bear LV6" from your hand or Deck.

 

For the last effect, what if your "Flying Crystal Bear LV6" is in your Graveyard by a card effect? Then you just lose a monster.

 

 

[spoiler=Flying Crystal Bear LV6]If this card is summoned by the effect of "Flying Crystal Bear LV3", you can destroy 1 card on the field. Once per turn when this card battles, you can randomly discard 1 card from your hand to have this card gain 400 ATK until the End Phase. While this card is face-up on the field no Trap Cards can be activated during either player's Battle Phase.

 

'up to' wasn't needed. "You can destroy up to 1 card on the field" just doesn't sound right.

 

 

[spoiler=Overgrown Crystal Warrior]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 1 face-up "Flying Crystal Bear LV6" on your side of the field and by randomly discarding 3 cards from your hand. This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. Once per turn when this card battles, you can increase the ATK of this card by the Level of the attacking monster x100.

 

I personally would change "This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards." to "Once per turn, you can negate the activation and effect of a Trap Card that effects this card and return it to its original position.", but that's just me.

 

 

the only issue was the discarding effect. You don't state where you discard them from, and choosing the cards you want to discard gives the effect too much flexibility, like with Dark World decks.

[byak]

Props for making them in JAP.

 

I don't really like the names (Flying Crystal Bear? How cheasy can you get?) You could just do "Crystal Bear" instead of how you have them now.

 

[spoiler=Flying Crystal Bear LV3]Once per turn when this card battles' date=' you can discard 1 card[b'](From Where?)[/b] to have this face-up card gain 300 ATK until the End Phase. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster as a result of battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Flying Crystal Bear LV6" from your hand or Deck.

 

For the last effect, what if your "Flying Crystal Bear LV6" is in your Graveyard by a card effect? Then you just lose a monster.

 

 

[spoiler=Flying Crystal Bear LV6]If this card is summoned by the effect of "Flying Crystal Bear LV3", you can destroy 1 card on the field. Once per turn when this card battles, you can randomly discard 1 card from your hand to have this card gain 400 ATK until the End Phase. While this card is face-up on the field no Trap Cards can be activated during either player's Battle Phase.

 

'up to' wasn't needed. "You can destroy up to 1 card on the field" just doesn't sound right.

 

 

[spoiler=Overgrown Crystal Warrior]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 1 face-up "Flying Crystal Bear LV6" on your side of the field and by randomly discarding 3 cards from your hand. This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. Once per turn when this card battles, you can increase the ATK of this card by the Level of the attacking monster x100.

 

I personally would change "This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards." to "Once per turn, you can negate the activation and effect of a Trap Card that effects this card and return it to its original position.", but that's just me.

 

 

the only issue was the discarding effect. You don't state where you discard them from, and choosing the cards you want to discard gives the effect too much flexibility, like with Dark World decks.

 

OCG has it so "discard" always means hand.

If it was something like deck, it would be send.

You can also send from the hand, either works.

 

Anyways, they kill your hand = bad.

[ProSora]

@T3RA: like above, discarding means to the graveyard, and i know i dont need up to >.>

 

@byak: not in a dark world deck xD

[T3RA PROWL3R]

On second thought, cards like this wouldn't work well in a Dark World Deck, unless they were titled as Dark World monsters.

[ProSora]

.... do you know what dark worlds are

most of them are special summoned when discarded by a card effect xD

and most people dont just put an archtype as the whole deck

[Lord Smeagle]

They honestly look more like lions to me. Maybe "Pridegem Swordbeast?" Something badass enough to fit the pic.

[ProSora]

true, i ment to put lions really o.o

but i thought bear, cuz overgrown looks more bear-ish than lion-ish

[Lord Smeagle]

Shoot, I have NEVER seen an animal that looks anything like Overgrown's pic. What are you smoking and where can I get some? :D

 

But yeah, it's solid, just, I think you should give them a bigger boost, since it really promotes bad hand management. And please change the name. Ursasword Gembeast, if you insist on bears, idk.

[LourDeath]

Shoot' date=' I have NEVER seen an animal that looks anything like Overgrown's pic. What are you smoking and where can I get some? :D

 

But yeah, it's solid, just, I think you should give them a bigger boost, since it really promotes bad hand management. And please change the name. Ursasword Gembeast, if you insist on bears, idk.

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name's not really catchy sir...

please think another...

PEACE!! ^.^

[ProSora]

@Lour: me think of another or smeagel o.o

 

and smeagal go yiff yourself >=3

[ragnarok1945]

good to see more Japanese cards

 

for the last card it's boring though, all it really does is make the attacking monster lose atk power

 

I was hoping it hand some other effect

 

8.7/10

[ProSora]

the attacking monster doesnt lose atk, this card gains atk, god rag >.>

[Saiba Aisu]

It's obvious that neither of those animals is a bear.

[ProSora]

It's obvious that neither of those animals is a bear.

 

shut up >.> T.T

my logic is better >=D