New archetype, Pirates

[FSBolthof]

Hello everyone

 

My new archetype is called Pirate and I was inspired by the Six Sumurai wich in some effect you may find back. You may find some OCG errors, please tell, so that I can fix them. Some images might not be perfect, but they fit together, you must watch them from a small distance. Well here they are:

 

For everyone who already saw these card. I'm going to post them again with good pictures, because I solved the problem.

 

[spoiler=Pirate Monsters]

Lore: This card cannot be Set and when it is Summoned, it is put in Defense Position. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can return 1 Monster Card on your opponent's side of the field to his/her hand. While you control "Pirate - Lady Cannoneer", once per turn you can choose 1 of the following effects:

* Discard 1 card in your opponent's hand to the Graveyard.

* Look at your opponent's hand.

 

Lore: When this card is destroyed by battle, destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field. While you control "Pirate - Lady Chief Officer", once per turn you can choose 1 of the following effects:

* Destroy 1 face-down card on your opponent's side of the field.

* Look at all face-down card on your opponent's side of the field.

 

Lore: When this card is destroyed by battle, you can remove the upper 3 cards from your opponent's Graveyard from play. While you control "Pirate - Lady Warrior", once per turn you can choose 1 of the following effects:

* Look at the upper 2 card of your opponent's Deck.

* Remove the upper card of your opponent's Deck from play.

 

Lore: Once per turn, you can equip this card to a face-up "Pirate" monster you control, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that equipped monster gains 500 ATK and DEF. When the equipped monster destroys an opponent's monster by battle, draw 1 card. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Spell and Trap Cards]

 

 

 

 

 

That was all folks. Please rate and comment. Please tell if some cards (especially Trap Cards) aren't that good or need changing.

Thanks for watching.

[MarshyK-XS]

1 - poor pics

2 - dont like archtypes but meh it may work

3 - ocg is quite good I cant spot any main errors

4 - the cards are okay

 

get the pics sorted out and change them to Warriors / Winged beasts instead of archtype

 

5.7 / 10

 

~MK

[Shong96]

Nice Cards. you have spells and traps to back them up too. but pics are just terrible quality

6/10

[FSBolthof]

The pics aren't that bad to rate so low, if you watch from a small distance they look pretty good and just to ask, why are they a bad archetype?

[Saiba Aisu]

It's pretty incredible how you can take such excellent pictures and ruin them by shrinking them on Paint.

 

For chrissakes, just use the Card Maker Uploader.

[FSBolthof]

I DID USE THE CARD MAKER UPLOADER!!!!!!!!

The weird thing is that these cards were made by Genzoman, with many good pictures although they can't be changed in sice, very strange. Does anyone have the same problem or knows how to fix it??

[Gawd of Spell]

I dont kare about images so...

9/10

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[ragnarok1945]

all the pics are blurry as hell

 

though from what I see the OCG and effects look ok, so I guess I'll give you the 6/10 for it (concept is getting overdone)