5-card Project: Beyonder (Final card added!)

[Jazin Kay]

[spoiler=Beyonder - Metis]

 

[spoiler=Beyonder - Thebe]

 

[spoiler=Beyonder - Adrastea]

 

[spoiler=Beyonder - Amalthea]

 

[spoiler=Beyonder - Giga Jupiter]

 

 

 

Updating regularly.

 

Essentially a minor archetype of LV8 Warriors that do stuff when discarded, named after some moons of Jupiter. Jupiter don't care, Jupiter got plenty.

[RAEGING D0GKING]

When will you add more cards?

Theres only 1 card so id like to see more if its OP for the set or not.

[Jazin Kay]

When will you add more cards?

Theres only 1 card so id like to see more if its OP for the set or not.

 

It's already being typed up.

 

I'm sorta thinking these up as I go.

[ragnarok1945]

I can only see Metis

 

that one right now looks OPed, slightly on the bland end, but I'll have to see the rest of the cards before fully judging that

[Jazin Kay]

I find it funny that I expect the bad players to say the rest of these are OPed.

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Thebe joins the Brawl!

[Inferno I20]

well it depends on how big your hand is, really discarding 2 cards for 1 seems pretty hefty but that is if you are willing to pay the cost for something that might be good or just suck

 

if you have infinite hands this card would basically dominate everything if you are looking for exodia

9/10

[Jazin Kay]

Adastrea added.

[Darj]

I don't know if this was your intention, but I want to point out that when a Beyonder is discarded by the effect of another Beyonder, its effect is NOT activated, because your Beyonders:

1. Discard cards as COSTS, not as effects.

2. Miss the timing, because being discarded is not the last thing to happen.

 

Dark World monsters have similar problems, and that's why their support card "Dark World Dealings" includes discarding as part of the effect, not as a cost.

 

How can you solve this? Simply replace "discard 1 card to" with "discard 1 card and"; with that change, discarding will be part of the effect and will occur as the same Time as the other effect, so the discarded Beyonder won't miss the timing.

[jack781217]

9/10

Seems great so far. I think their effects are quite powerful (because they can still activate them when discard as cost), like those of the Monarch, so keep their stat down (like you did with the first 2)

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I want to point out that when a Beyonder is discarded by the effect of another Beyonder' date=' its effect is NOT activated, because your Beyonders:

1. Discard cards as COSTS, not as effects.

2. Miss the timing, because being discarded is not the last thing to happen.

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Dark World monster's effect specifically states that "If this card is discarded from the hand to the Graveyard by a card effect"

Whereas if you look at Fabled monster, "When this card is discarded from your hand to the Graveyard", so it can still activate when discarded as a cost.

 

But you are right about missing the timing. To avoid this, the effect needs to be "mandatory", meaning the lore would say "When this happens, do that" instead of "When this happens, you can do that", which he did take care of

[Jazin Kay]

Amalthea added.

[TitanKing]

9/10

Seems great so far cant wait to see the last one

 

on another note are you going to be adding these to your archive anytime soon?

[Jazin Kay]

Final card added.

[ragnarok1945]

as always you get 10/10 for the pics

 

are you sure un-targetable is the right OCG? Other than that everything is perfect for OCG and effects

 

9.9/10

[Jazin Kay]

"Un-targetable" is official OCG, due to it's usage on the text of "Ritual of Grace".