Guest Zeonark Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 [align=center]I couldn't find a good picture. So sue me. Anyway, 7000 posts, yay. I need to stop moving so fast before I get banned. /: ...Err... Yeah. Also, this is a card that'll be used in one of the future chapters of a Fanfic I'm writing. Too lazy to link it from here. It's support for White Night Dragon. So, I tried to make it somewhat like it's effect (Negating Spells/Traps). Oh, and the OCG needs fixing on the first sentence. So fix it.And the "Disaster" part of the name comes from the name of the Deck it's used in. You can only activate this card in response to a Spell or Trap card your opponent controls while you control a face-up "White Night Dragon". Negate the activation of the card and then destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field and inflict damage to your opponent for each card destroyed this way x 300. Rate/Hate/Comment. Whatever.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Wait, is someone running Disaster Dragons in this 'fic? Oo that's actually a reasonably competitive and real Deck, rare to see that in fanfics unless it's Blackwings, again. The card is interesting, but even in a Deck that loves WND, this wouldn't probably be consistent enough, so I'd likely fall to running something else such as MBaaS, Bribe, ect. The added Heavy is pretty much a drawback, too, since this will most often be stopping something during your opponent's turn, meaning you make the field much clearer for them to run over, and if you do use it on your turn, you've probably just negated the only major threat that turn anyway. I wouldn't run it in a "WND Deck" or such, but in a fanfic, where consistency means nothing, I expect it could be pretty interesting =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Someone does run Blackwings in the fic, but this isn't in it.There are plenty competitive decks in it too, Disaster Dragon is one of them. ;D Oh man... forgot that it clears a path for your opponent... Gah. Thanks a bunch Griffin. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 After Trollta's rant on the anime where everyone plays awful and only wins with mega-luck, it's nice to see some fanfiction with srs duelists, most don't even count as tier 4 with the "deck building skills" they use which is about what you get from a 10 year old buying their first packs. Like I said, a wee bit consistent IRL, but good for fics, which makes this hard to comment on. No problem Zoe~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 LolTrollta. That was my intention, for Tier 1-to-Tier 3 decks to be used in the fic. And I'm starting to wonder if they really are a bunch of 10 year olds buying their first packs in the Anime. Sorry it's hard to comment on then. You called me Zoe again... <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 Wait is White Night Dragon a real card or your created card?Seems ok.Its something like Dark Bribe with Heavy Storm.But you still need the monster in play.So9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/White_Night_Dragon Originally, I had wanted something like Blue Stream Of Destruction or whatever it was called.Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 nice to see a WND support burn damage doesn't look like it'll be TOO much, so I consider this balanced out 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 [align=center]You can only activate this card in response to a Spell or Trap card your opponent controls while you control a face-up "White Night Dragon". Negate the activation of the card and then destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field and inflict damage to your opponent for each card destroyed this way x 200.[/align] *sues. But seriously, this is a pretty great White Night Dragon support. Love it. Great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 @Canadian: *Counter-Sues* D<Will fix later. To give this a little more power, would increasing the burn to x 300 work? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 Its not the burn that makes it good, but the heavy storm part. If you want to up the burn, go for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 [align=center]You can only activate this card in response to a Spell or Trap card your opponent controls while you control a face-up "White Night Dragon". Negate the activation of the card and then destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field and inflict damage to your opponent for each card destroyed this way x 200.[/align] I never really looked at the card White Night Dragon' date=' and I haven't played the game in years, but seriously, this is a pretty great White Night Dragon support. Love it. Great work.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Zeonark Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 Will change it to x 300 with the OCG fix then. Thanks. What, Eclipse, you're too lazy to think of your own comment? D:Lol. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 22, 2010 Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 My character thanks you =D Good card ^_\\\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted April 22, 2010 Report Share Posted April 22, 2010 Trollta is fantastic. His rants are inarticulate and childish, but they're still bloody good. Nice to see a fic character actually running a decent deck. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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