Guest Welche Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 Yes. I know that. Oh, wait. I meant the third Shadow Rider. The Gladiator.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted April 10, 2010 Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 I likes. This is really good. Bravo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2010 Thank you ^_\\\ This is going to be nothing like GX, people ^_\\\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted April 11, 2010 Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 I thought it wouldn't, but I would like to see more so I can understand the plot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 Don't worry, I'll be writing tonight ^_\\\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 11, 2010 Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 Their will be Microsoft. Microsoft word in fact. I'll be making a character. BELIEVE IT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted April 11, 2010 Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 Are you SURE The Hunger Games was in present tense? Because I'm pretty sure the only time present tense works is in choose-your-own-adventure stories - which don't work. Period. OK, so yes, this is good so far. Do try to proofread, because I'm pretty sure Slifer's name ends in an 'r'. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 Bump. Turn Two will be coming soon. Maybe some more characters would help..;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 Oh right. What do you need? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 Are you SURE The Hunger Games was in present tense? The Hunger Games is in present tense. I've read it 2 times. Just to stay on topic, can't wait to see more, Yankee. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 Too much like GX. The story seems to bland for me. It was okay, but not BIG... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 It gets different trust me. For one thing this is EAST dueling academy. Not those pussies on an island were you really have to be a completle loser to not get to on time. This one you have to WALK TO. Plus notice the prolouge? Notice how it doesn't have kuriboh? That will become important later on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 I could really need younger characters, and some people here putting in some of their own XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 Are you SURE The Hunger Games was in present tense? The Hunger Games is in present tense. I've read it 2 times. Just to stay on topic' date=' can't wait to see more, Yankee.[/quote'] ^This^ And, as a matter of fact, I would like to post a character. Should I Pm him/her/it to you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 Please PM. I enjoy making people be surprised ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Nice me likey ^_^ But yeah there were a few errors here and there but other than that it was very good I like how the crowd really got into it. In a way I thought the Admin was going to be Zane but then you changed it around which is nice. Looking forward to the next chapter how many characters can we send you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 As many as you want, but I might not accept them all.I'm about to post the first part to "Turn 2"^_\\\ EDIT: It's posted! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Foreshadowing! Why is Alex's eye so evil? Find out on a different turn of Yugioh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Nice job Yankee. It was a little freaky though that that voice called him a little boy. The voice sounded like a pedo. o.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 XDWell, when you're all powerful, you can call young men many things ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Interesting, a new part. The chimeratech guy looks powerful, he may be interesting to see more of. Besides that Bellphon doesn't seem to have much personallity, at least not yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Hmm...very intriguing...so many characters...it makes my head spin. Just kidding. That voice did creep me out though. I like the new chapters, and I can't wait to see how it all comes together. Just wondering, are you going to use my person. I don't know, cause you didn't respond to my Pm. Oh well. Still love the story! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Were you the one who didn't say what deck he was using? If so then probbaly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 Yeah, but I have a deck my character can use. What the heck, I'll send it too her. I just assumed Lust would want to use her own cards, like I do in my own fanfic. Guess I was wrong. Oh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 17, 2010 Report Share Posted April 17, 2010 ... Lust? Isn't the author both Yankee and a guy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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